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I hope you got the original writers permission to repost a story that they deleted off the site.

Good and fun story..
Lots of world building
Thank you for writing.
Motherofthehorde

Loved it... until that Kami damaged cliff hanger

This is a beautiful, beautiful story whoever wrote it I give many kudos to! I don't think I've laughed this hard from a fanfiction in a long time! If you know any other stories by the author please let me know!

...what? WAIT WHAT?

Please do not mark uncompleted stories as complete. I really enjoyed this but I make it a point not to read abandoned stories and this was very disappointing.

I KNEW IRUKA WAS THE CUTEST THING EVER! GO IRU-CHAN! TAKE OVER THE WORLD UNINTENTIONALLY! ADD NARUTO FOR EXTRA FEELS!

Needs more sunset no jutsu and maybe more koalaphants. Otherwise, I'm fine because my brain is high enough on the "Scale of Youth" to not need therapy! Yay! XD

PLEASE TELL ME THERES A SEQUEL PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WHERE CAN I FIND IT?

I barely finished the first chapter... Not because it was bad... But because of kakashi... Cute? Why is he thinking iruka us cute?! Are you trying to imply kakashi is gay? Kakashi... They guy who READS PORN WHILE HE FIGHTS... Seriously... Its painfully obvious you have some fantasies you cant keep out of your writing...

Gai wears green not blue.

this is different and very interesting I would love to read more of it.

This story is GREAT! I wish it could be continued, maybe someday.

Also, awesome profile pic, laughed when I saw it then became jealous that I remembered that I didn't have it.

what the heck? why does this seem incomplete...