That was awesome *nosebleed* /

Love it. First one I have read with Mikami...Like it a lot.

Omg...this is AMAZING! So much lemon! XD I think I'm going to die~

Well written and well thought threw~ Provo I say, PROVO!

Wow... That was one intense Lemon. :D this was really, really good! X3

Finally! some good mikami and light action! Love the story by the way ;)

Yay! Mikami rules. Naww, I liked this, great job.

so hot so hot so hot so hot i loved it

x3 ME LURVE IT! x3

Wow that was realy hot. But Shame poor guy can only dream of what he wants

WHOA. 8D

I think... I love this. Wow. Although, I can't help but wonder what would happen if Near or Mello saw footage of this? XD

That was SO good! Are you gonna continue? No need for cross fingers LOL _; with this story, it's already heaps good. But in the end I was lyke "aw" cuz I actually thought they had sex, but NO. You just hadta make it a dream huh? O.o It's ok lol XD I was just kidding. That was REALLY smexy.

I'm only only vol 2 of Death Note,

but I google image searched this dude and OMR.

He's EXACTLY my type...

seme-ish, black hair, red eyes... can't WAIT to read about him! D

Light is a bit of a hottie too,

even tho he's meant to be kinda average in looks. :)

Anyhoo, loving the fic!

I love how you made it dark and masochistic without any major roughness,

Generally a great lemon and superb dialogue. :D

xWithLoveFromKhaosKittyx

Very good job! Your first death note fanfiction? I think that you did very well.