Whew some heavy angst in these chapters, great job writing them. Really captured the beauty and raw pain of the characters, well done!

What gripping feeling this one shot conveyed. Fitting terror and godliness of the power of the Uchiha curse. Thanks for sharing!

Wow, what an impact this short one shot had. The finality of death and the wishes in hindsight create powerful images and feelings. Very vivid imagery comes to mind with this. Thanks for sharing!

So glad to see you writing again. Hopefully this means Fealty will be updated soon.

*fingers crossed*

:))

WAHHHHH it's so sad and poetic and..sniff

Keep it up! :)

-shasa

Wow. Very emotional. I love it! :)

I'm so happy to read something of yours again, missing you much. So heart breaking, but true. I think not many fans understand why Sakura came to the conclusion she did about trying to kill Saskue. But this little one shot told a wonderful story about why. To many haters out there now. I am extremely happy that a new chapter for Color Theory is in the works, it is one of my all time favs of all the fics on ff that I have read. And I have read one heck of a lot. Well take care and I wish you the best with the new chapter. Until next time.

Me LOVES THIS DRABBLE! X3 Especially the last line. Sometimes it's easy for us to forget that Sasuke is just only human no matter what he claims. You are...wow.

once again, i love it. did team hawk die? just not quite understanding...

poor jiraiya... poor tsunade... another loved one gone..

very sad. good job.

and this rings true. Great writing. I especially loved:

Worth. Was he worthy? Why did they care? Why couldn't he truly sever his bonds? Why did he care? Why? Why? Why? Juugo. Suigetsu. Karin. Kakashi. Naruto. Sakura. Why?

Young, forcibly repressed images flashed before his mental eye. Team Seven. The first bonds he'd formed as a ninja, those tenacious strings of fate that refused to be severed. Something was building behind his eyes, cresting and washing in as the thoughts whirled. A word, a command slipped past his lips. "Amaterasu!"

He was not the boy who abandoned Konoha any longer. He was stronger, bloodier, jaded, old, fraying. Stained.

He was Sasuke Uchiha and he acknowledged the bonds that forged him.

This was so sad. Especially the last line. Jiraiya and Tsunade are a definite might-have-been. Great writing.

ahh! Brilliant as usual! Such a great notification and description of emotions! You captured the part of the manga perfectly!

finally the chicken haired dumbass gets it.

very nicely done kate!

:D

but i'm just feeling really, ugh about the whole thing. Yes, he's remembering Sakura, and Kakashi, and Naruto, D: but I don't really like it that he's being attached to Team Hawk.

sigh.