That was insane!
What you did with Victor...only to find out it was that loony Kaufman... ha! Totally didn't see it coming!
And what an ending! *bows*

That was downright epic, man! The way you just vaulted into Ravenholme, kicking ass! I was like, "Use the buzz saws, use the buzz saws! "
And then when Grigory sacrificed himself to distract the Zombies. Wow, I could just picture that awesome action scene where a major explosion silhouettes the hero walking towards the camera!
*gasp* amd then when Gordon entered the train tracks...
...and did exactly what I did, tossing grenades into the overpasses to take out the snipers! XD I'll admit I didn't use the gravity gun to toss them, I still used it to toss propane gas cylinders and other junk at the Combine! Ha, that Gravity Gun was one of my new favourite toys
...after the crowbar of course. ;)

No singing Vort? Aww. Me is disappointed.

Wow, and here I thought I was the only one who thought the HUD for the suit worked like that.

You do know that this was an Orthodox Church, don't you? No lights, no sculptures. Only sunlight and shadow, and paintings that preach the word of God to those who can't read. I'm not a religious person, but there is no such thing as a boring Orthodox church.

Amazing, I love how you recreated Gordon's little adventure under the bridge, but you forgot the Crossbow here. It's found in two places - in one of the houses a little before the bridge, and on a platform in the middle of the underbelly of the bridge. I still haven't read the other chapters so I dunno if you introduced it later, but this would've been a cool place to "get a new toy".

Heddy Lamarr? Sweet reference to Blazing Saddles! was that in the game? I can't remember if it was.

That part with Kaufman - Mind blown. I believed the part that it was Tower, but Kaufman? Just, damn. o_o

Amazing story. I know it's just the game novelisation but man you know how to make it awesome!

I'm not happy by how Gordon and Alyx are though. I thought you might got them together despite what cannon game says.

Poor Gordan...how will he ever want to leave Ravenholm after discovering the joy of Gravity Gun Sawblades Zombies?

I definitely thought the last CP on the airboat scene was hilarious, though I wish Gordan had just tapped him in the chest with a finger and then the CP would dramatically grasp at his heart and jump off.

You've never seen the unplugged TV broadcasting the G-man at the beggining of this chapter? It's scary as hell. I would've loved to see how you wrote Gordon's terror as he follows that mysteriously creepy radio noise through a darkened out-of-the-way residential complex to the TV that was playing it.

I love your story (I know that is HL2 Story) but its perfectly written... I hope that you write Ep 1 and 2

I love the Bugbait. Every time I get to that part I feel like a king.

I also love how sarcastic Gordon is.

On Tumblr, the Alyx/Gordon relationship is referred to as Freemance, which I think is pretty creative.