This is already amazing, and English is you're second language? It doesn't seem like it, it's really great.

Please, please,please update. I loved this story so much. It is really lovely. Please, I beg of you, reconsider.

Oh please update soon! I love this story with all my heart and can not wait for the update! But can you please keep all of the same characters! Will watch your profile! Bubbles

As long as you keep writing I'm sure everyone will be happy! You're a wonderful writer, and whether you finish this story or not it will stay in my favorites list. :)

-TWOCP

but this story was so great! i loved your original charaters, and the way you had the intereations with them all. it is heart breaking that this may never see a concluision.

you will rewrite this story? but is not worst and take you much time then continue this one. i hope you dont change to much. i really miss this one and im sad you decided to put it on hiatus.

ok

Please please plee update! I really want to know what happens with Lucy and Zerind!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

Please upload soon, i love this story and truly wish to see how everything will work out.

Isn't this suppose to be a Caspian Susan fic?

I really can't wait for the rest. I love the parts with the babies and the whole kings getting drunk, I always wondered what Caspian was like when he is drunk. Keep up the good work.

Hay i love ur story. its beautiful, sweet and so funny. I hope Peter and maram have another child and this time i hope for a girl, so they can have two boys and two girls.

PLEASE dont take to long to update. I love this story. Ur amazing.

UPDATE SOON :)

Please please please please please please please please please please please write more? Thank you. Princess of Narnia 1192

i know this story is old but im being u plzzz plzz update this sstorry soon im being plz plz plz this is mmy fave caspian story plz plz plz update i just wunt to know if lu gets pranet plz update

I think I should say that this is probably the fanfic that I've been wanting to be updated the most. It's probably the best one that I've read! I love the humor, suspense, and random bits in it. :)

Just a little tip though... When you make these long paragraphs with four different people speaking, it makes it a little difficult to read. Why not start a new line for every time a new character starts to speak? It makes it easier to read.

That's the only thing that's been bothering me. Other than that, it's the best Narnian fanfic out there that I've read. I can't wait to see what else is in store for this story!

~The Wolf Of Cair Paravel~