| Reviews for Ramensick |
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   IdrianWatzon chapter 1 . 10/19/2008 Wow, this was an extremely interesting story to read. I love it! :D You have a talent. I especially love Naruto's so-called description of ramen being the "Food of the Gods". :D It makes me wonder if someday, I'll get sick from eating it too much. 'cuz I'm practically addicted to it. :D Especially the cheese flavored type. :D Ahem. Anyway, what an amazing story. I noticed very few grammatical mistakes, and very few spelling errors (none I can think of, anyway). I thank you for the wonderful read. |
| Kasuchi Koichi chapter 1 . 8/23/2008 This was funny. This will sound stupid, but you should make a spinoff story where Hinata gets sick from eating a bad batch of cinnamon rolls (her favorite food). It could be called "Cinnamonsick" or something like that. It might be funny. |
| BananaphoneBob chapter 1 . 7/23/2008 Aww! That was so cute! Naruto is so damn oblivious! But it was great though, lol, loved it! -x-Emma-x- |
| PhinalPhantasy chapter 1 . 7/21/2008 this was nice and cute |
| SilentSinger948 chapter 1 . 7/21/2008 Cute. Great job. |
| grandiloquentCaecity chapter 1 . 7/19/2008 Cute, i liked it! |
| TobisaruJC chapter 1 . 7/18/2008 Heheheheh nice |
| adngo714 chapter 1 . 7/17/2008 "Yes, I will go on a date with you." Naruto grinned widely. "Huh?" Hinata wonderedd, to shocked to faint. BEST...SCENE...EVER! |
| Facing Fear chapter 1 . 7/17/2008 That was nice. Really fluffy, and it had a nice concept (Naruto getting sick from Ramen). I find that hilarious, that Naruto got sick from ramen, it's like when Chouji got sick from BBQ. I also liked the berating that came from his friends, it's what friends do, right? They acted believably, and convincingly, that it could've been an actual filler from Naruto - kudos! Wow, that was unexpected, the whole Hinata experience to be a dream, but I guess that's where the dramatic irony comes out in the end. Seriously, I liked it, the small nuances (where Naruto begins to look at the ceiling after seeing... some appendages... that belonged to Hinata), and the imagery from the words you used are beautiful. The ending was alright, leaves the rest up to the reader's imagination, and ended in a way that NaruHina fans would want (Naruto taking initiative), and how he used the dream to do that. I liked it, and hope you write somemore! |
| Rose Tiger chapter 1 . 7/17/2008 Naruto geting sick because of ramen? That's rich! XD |
| LiL-Princess-Of-Death chapter 1 . 7/17/2008 aww funny and cute! great story! |
| teddydevil3 chapter 1 . 7/17/2008 YES! love it! is this a one-shot or is there going to be more? if so PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
