smoke weed everyday

lol

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I dont know what to say, you pretty much copied Just Friends, the Wedding Singer, and Brown Sugar, almost word for word at some points...

Very nice story overall. Solid plot, though characters were a bit OOC, but not horribly so. One thing that drove me crazy, though, is that every now and then, you replaced "Adonis" with "Jason" and in chapter seven, you once replaced "Kori" with "Mira". Thanks for writing this!

Humph,that was a 'long story,short'!

xD

But i liked it!

that... is... AWESOME! but... is that it? what happens? ME IS DYING! i LOVE IT!

DO a sequel, it would be fun to see the sequel this time from Raven's POV.

This was a great story from start to finish and I'm glad to be a part of it.

Thank you so much for making this great story and I encourage you to follow your writing and continuing on to make more good stories.

Thank you again and good luck on any future stories. ;)

Magnificent! Although, I say that if this was the last chapter, you should consider writing an epilogue or a sequel :) Either way, great story :D

The ending was the perfect sweetness you can get. It was a very twisted story of desperate love; and sadly, it does happen.

It's very pleasing to know that he got the girl in the end. I always love reading stories in the first person, it makes me feel like I can really relate to whoever is narrating. Very nice description you used and the dialogue was- in a very rare case- melded to fit modern-day times.

I loved the whole idea of the satisfactory Garfield after he looked at the clock. The phrase you used: "Plenty of time." at the end was cute and cherishable. Like, there WAS plenty of time to catch her, and he really did care about her to even attempt to.

The ending was cliched like most stories. Like, "time is running out and I'll miss her". Nope, not for you, and that was nice, for a change. You gave real live situations and opened people's eyes to the real world, not just fantasy.

Very nice work here. Although not a lot of people like to look at the real world- me being one of them- I liked how you made me realize it.

This is definitely going on my favorites list.

Congratulations!

-Gun toten Girly

Wow, Raven is one tough nut to crack.

Still it's always nice to see Beast boy trying to be the senstative one and continue on waiting for her. :D

Keep up the great work as this story progress. ;)

Great, great, great chapter :) and I love how quick you update

not the best way to solve an issue but at least it comes out. and you should tell about how Rae comes to the conclusion. the way you write it like saying, "yeah I get it, so what's the big deal?" a little more taste of how she feels will make it better.

anyway, that is my personal opinion, you did good though

serves that jerk right :D

anyway, on to chapter 5, I kind of late on giving this review :P

Once again another great chapter.

Please do continue the good work as I can't wait to see what happens next. ;)