Wow, this was an amazing Paul/ OC imprint story. A favorite. The typos and common mistakes throughout the story bothered me, but the plot was still fascinating. Thank you for sharing this HEA.

So, like the other one M1A is my pseud. Thought I did not write it un the other one. I think I last and first reviewed on ch.15...
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This story is beautiful...
And I did say I wished it never ended but I am glad it did... right moment... perfect closure
Thank you for the journey

Okay
Chill
This is fucking sad
Not this chapter, the entire story! But why do you portray this... girl... so... like

Inner arguings
Hate
Self loathing
Pride
Pity
Some more self loathing
Hurt
Psychotic breaks

Lol
This is epic

Trust issues...
Hurt some more

Why is she ...

I...
Love issues
Lol

Thid is cracking me up
The story is flawless... seems like a movie
I don't want it to end

I love Kara

Thank you

Oh... and your Paul is so in character... thank you so much

sorry this is so unbelievable and...abit stupid...thats not possible.

Awe so sad but so beautiful

One of the very few stories that made me cry, I just love the character you built. Very well written!:)

Really? Paul Walker?

My favorite part is "I just didn't want you to end up like Jason okay?"

It always works out

They sound like a old married couple, no they sound like when I whine to my boyfriend, who I try to not have feelings for, to leave me alone and he knows I want him near and so will not do so

Tara is sister or aunt or something like that

I really enjoyed it! Very descriptive words, I cried twice...

He's dead isn't he? POOR JAY!

This seems interesting. The only problem I see is that your tenses change a lot. It's a common problem with an easy fix if you just slow down writing. Choose a tense, past of more preferable to me, and stick to it. Some phrases may sound weird but they aren't. I'm enjoying this so far. :)

Yeah, so...Paige is a shitty friend. It sounds like Kara was sexually abused and possibly drugged whilst drunk. Not a great way to lose her virginity, and Paige teases her over having quickies with Paul in school? Yeah, she 'forgot.' That's a pretty inconsiderate friend. Petty thoughts aside, after the first chapter, the characters don't seem to have much depth.

Going for the cliche, girl-hates-boy beginning, that's cool, that can work despite being an overused concept. It doesn't seem to be working for you. She's already starting to feel attraction for Paul in the first chapter despite hating him, yet again, that can still work, but your language is pretty dull, and doesn't carry any sort of weight to it. It kind of reads like, "Gosh, I hate Paul. Oh, look at him. How sexy. Wait, why do I think he's sexy?" Obviously, not what you wrote, but it has the same sort of juvenile, childish feel to it that doesn't really fit with the voice of an eighteen year old girl.

When they were speaking in Spanish, instead of constantly using the phrase "I/Paige said in spanish" you could've started with, "I switched over to spanish and asked Paige..." blah, blah, blah. And then, once the spanish was over, end with, "I reverted back into english, no longer carrying to disguise our conversation."

Similarly, you should probably cut down on the word "said." If you can use a word other than said, always go for that instead. Always try as much as you can to not use that word. It's really repetitive and mind numbing.

Lastly, there's the belief in the writing world that a reader will decide what they think of the story in the first few words, sentence. On fanfictions, I try to get through the first chapter. But after your first chapter, I'm stopping now.

Out of ten, I'd give this a two.

P.S. It's 'tough' not 'tuff.' Simple spell check should sort this out.