Reviews for A Daydream
not used anymore sorry chapter 1 . 10/30/2015
Truth- Bella realizes she's already falling in too deep and already intoxicated.:)
happiness5678 chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
Great job! Very in character and "Bella!"
hilararoula chapter 1 . 6/9/2010
it's great!
Child of the True King chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
Wow, this is awsome! Its really good for your first attempt on twilight!
The Predatory Wasp chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
ah, this was really really good!
Tristan Fletcher chapter 1 . 4/20/2009
Quick comment: I have read almost all of your Twilight work, and I've noticed that you use the word "stir" or "stirred" a lot, but what I think you mean is "steer" or "steered". No biggie, just a minor part of the language barrier; I thought you would want to know, as you seem a perfectionist like me.

Great work, as always! Thanks for writing, you always leave me wanting more, just like Meyer.
June chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
I know its only short but I was really captured by this one shot. It's almost freaky, but in a romantic and very twilighty way. weird, huh?

It is amazingly written and very enjoyable. I like the way it ended with a quenstion mark as to what actually happened.
pleasebiteme chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
That was really good. I like your style. (:

Hope to read more Twilight stuff from you!
Obsessive.Hollan chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
I love your writing style !

You should deffinatly write more twilight stories :D
pixie freak chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
wow! I LOVE UR WRITING STYLE ITS AMAZING! considering u havent written twilight at all this is really really well written and so Bella you have to create a twilight story please!