Reviews for A Daydream |
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not used anymore sorry chapter 1 . 10/30/2015 Truth- Bella realizes she's already falling in too deep and already intoxicated.:) |
happiness5678 chapter 1 . 6/14/2010 Great job! Very in character and "Bella!" |
hilararoula chapter 1 . 6/9/2010 it's great! |
Child of the True King chapter 1 . 3/23/2010 Wow, this is awsome! Its really good for your first attempt on twilight! |
The Predatory Wasp chapter 1 . 9/30/2009 ah, this was really really good! |
Tristan Fletcher chapter 1 . 4/20/2009 Quick comment: I have read almost all of your Twilight work, and I've noticed that you use the word "stir" or "stirred" a lot, but what I think you mean is "steer" or "steered". No biggie, just a minor part of the language barrier; I thought you would want to know, as you seem a perfectionist like me. Great work, as always! Thanks for writing, you always leave me wanting more, just like Meyer. |
June chapter 1 . 3/30/2009 I know its only short but I was really captured by this one shot. It's almost freaky, but in a romantic and very twilighty way. weird, huh? It is amazingly written and very enjoyable. I like the way it ended with a quenstion mark as to what actually happened. |
pleasebiteme chapter 1 . 7/27/2008 That was really good. I like your style. (: Hope to read more Twilight stuff from you! |
Obsessive.Hollan chapter 1 . 7/27/2008 I love your writing style ! You should deffinatly write more twilight stories :D |
pixie freak chapter 1 . 7/27/2008 wow! I LOVE UR WRITING STYLE ITS AMAZING! considering u havent written twilight at all this is really really well written and so Bella you have to create a twilight story please! |