I love it. Update please.

Oooo this I like too. And I like what you did. I'm wondering will you add anymore to this a continuation maybe that takes place with the newer chapters

I liked this chapter but for some of it it got really cheesy lines. I like the spin on this and find it amusing I found this after I started doing pretty much this.

Tfw the first part is in season 2 :3

Daaaaaaawwwww

Technically Road did the first kiss but it only lasted a moment so Cross would be his first REAL kiss.

Fifth time Im reading this x)

LOVED IT. EXACTLY HOW I IMAGINED IT AND WANTED IT TO HAPPEN BETWEEN THEM.

Realistic. I always somewhat hated how the order simply accepted gay pairings so easily. For one it was centuries ago when men were expected to marry women and have children and for two the order is part of the church, and being gay is a sin for them. It's nice having such a serious pairing. And Cross X Allen is my definitely favourite pairing from Grayman.

He'll this was depressing...wonderful,but very...depressing...I'm going to curl up in a corner and tangible while crying...

Ridiculously beautiful, loved every moment of it, perfect and professionally done

Exactly as my name says.. I FREAKIN' LOVE THIS FANFIC! w

that was great. so cute!

Hello, I really liked your fic, mostly because I love Allen, but I do not really like it at times, I really like the couple CrossxAllen, is one of my favorites, but Cross is a bastard sometimes, shame not many fics of them, so hopefully they do more fics, lol, well keep it up, thanks and kisses.

cool yo