Reviews for A Shinkumi Wedding A Series of Unfortunate Events
Shadowfox13 chapter 23 . 10/2/2014
Heh, I'd love to see how her student react to hearing stories about Yankumi from her own middle school and high school days. *hehehehehe* I can just imagine them gaping to. Hehehehe and poor Kumiko would probably be upset and scandalized a bit, ne. Heh, but I'd bet the boys'd be impressed. ;)

I feel sad for the Odagiri though, hope he gets his chance at love.
Shadowfox13 chapter 15 . 10/2/2014
Heh, it'd be interesting to see all her students' reactions to hearing stories of her high school years. *lol*
SheWhoIsPowerful chapter 23 . 2/8/2011
great job. from the very begining i have been hopelessy hooked on this story. and even though the ending was a long time comming it was well worth the wait. i love how you sayed true to the charaters while putting your oun spin on things good work
SheWhoIsPowerful chapter 21 . 11/20/2010
i have totally and completly fallen in love with your story. And while it was very fustrating to have to wait so long for a new chapter, as a fellow perfectionest i understand you need to take your time and perfect your story. Me i would rather not submite anything then to put up something that doesn't make sense or is just not right. So cudos, and i will be pationtly waiting for the next chapter of this amazing story no matter how long it takes so take your time. And have fun with it.
always-kh chapter 2 . 11/17/2009
funny at the start. nice.
darkweb47 chapter 19 . 9/29/2009
o so hot and full of twist. hope u update lot sooner
BlackJack7 chapter 16 . 6/1/2009
Love yankumi's costume dress. That is exactly the reaction I would have expected from Ojou. I cracked when she used the veil as a boomerang.

Again, I love the flow of the Kyou-Satomi conversation.

Love, love, love when Ojou didn't want to give up the costume dress. Hey! What's not to like?

The boys are perverts.

I thought it was a nice touch to show how Ojou was concentrating on walking down the aisle without tripping. It was something so simple yet so Kumiko. It made me smile.

I laughed when I read his men walking down the aisle as well scanning the crowd for any suspicious movements.
BlackJack7 chapter 15 . 5/22/2009
I only have three things to say.

Oh Kyou, how could you?

Poor Yoshiro-kun. :(

I'm glad Noda got socked by Shin. Yep, he deserved it.
BlackJack7 chapter 14 . 5/6/2009
What can I say, again? Noda is an idiot.

I guess I was hoping Noda would show more regret (or at least forced to show more regret than he did) but I guess you had to also concentrate on the chase.

The chaotic movement was well done.

Love Yankumi saying "where are you?" while she cracked her knuckles.

It was so wonderfully cheeky to have Shin running around calling out for Kumiko. I had to laugh.
BlackJack7 chapter 13 . 5/6/2009
What can I say?

Noda is an idiot.

Hahaha

When my sister got married she also got some 'helpful advice' from some women. Ugh. You wouldn't believe it. Heck, I couldn't believe it. Well, I won't go into that. I might vomit.

Well done.
momokochii chapter 9 . 5/6/2009
i love this chapter

they're trying to stop the shinkumi wedding ..

four confessions ..

sugoii ..

anou take care
BlackJack7 chapter 12 . 5/4/2009
The gaijin-sensei and fan boy part was pretty clever. Is it a real manga? I am assuming you made it up. I giggled when I read about it (mostly because every time I read it I kept hearing in my head some guy talking through a loudspeaker and saying: "And here we have, Gaijin-sensei and Fan Boy." Hahaha

Ah, one part I was confused. I thought Minami and Noda were within hearing distance of Odagiri when he said that he would be first in line if Imani and Tsuchi broke up. So, I didn't understand why later they wondered if Odagiri was Imani's boyfriend. I don't know if it got lost in editing or if I missed something. Did he say it but they didn't hear it? Just got me a little confused.
BlackJack7 chapter 11 . 5/4/2009
"I swear the whole lot of them are gangsters.” Hahaha The line was priceless and the image leading to it wonderful. I actually laughed aloud.

The Kekkon-Kyou scene was great.

To have Kyou actually say he didn't care about the whole indirect kiss had me reeling with laughter. It was so unlike the yakuza to even address such a concern that having Kyou reassure her not to worry about it was hilarious.

Hahaha I knew Imani was gonna jump.

Great chapter.
momokochii chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
nice stOry you have ]
agreywriter15 chapter 18 . 3/22/2009
This story is very dramatic.

These are the words of how I can describe it.

:)
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