I have just spent the last 2 days reading these diaries, they read as Lanto would have written them, brilliant!

This is my third or fourth read through of your brilliant wonderfully entertaining story (I come back to it every couple of years). Not sure if I've ever commented before, so just wanted to let you know that 10 years after you started this, people are still reading (and re-reading) and enjoying your skills at sharing familiar events from a different perspective. I agree with your previous commenters - would have loved to see more of series 2, including Adrift and Something Borrowed...however, it's obviously not meant to be. I hope you've continued writing, even if it's not Torchwood. Loved, loved, loved it.

Please write some more... I go back here every other year in the hope of finding more chapters.

Well written, but I must admit that if Ianto really wanted to sit next to Jack e could have. Gwen being there seems to be a pretty feeble excuse, at least Gwen will make sure the other don't lock Jack away/

I love it its just when the Canary Wharf battle happened would he really be walking round writing in his diary? Lol just kidding.

Reading and loving this, thank you for being so clever and imaginative!

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Fun story! Please find time to continue updating.

Hi, I just wanted to say that I love this story more than almost anything (especially the paint ball scene). It was my introduction to fanfiction and it made me want to read an write more. So yeah, thanks :)

OMG ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT! Really Ive loved it! *-* The way you write, its just like if it was Ianto who actually wrote it! And the other characters are exactly the same way the're in the show. And the most amazing thing about it is that it completely fits with the Torchwood canon. I'd love if you had gone until the end of series 2 because in my opinion it finishes very soon but anyway GREAT! Love the way Ianto behaves about his relationship with Jack and being jealous of Gwen and everything as if he was a teenager, lovely :') And there have been moments where I have laugh out loud, really such a good jokes! xDD
Keep writting! :) xx

Bit of an abrupt ending?

I fell in love with this story years ago...

Are you ever going to update it and write until Ianto's death? Or until the end of series 2?

This is my absolute favourite Janto/Torchwood fanfiction!

torchwoodfour u rock! this was really good. i love how u included the doctor who cross over in atmosfear. i would love it if you could do the same for the doctor who episode "the stolen earth" where ianto, gwen, and jack help the doctor defeat the daleks. its my favorite episode and i would love to see it from iantos point of view. email me at

Absolutely brilliant! I loved it. I couldn't put it down! Your writing skills are amazing and I love your imagination in Jack and Ianto's moments alone, the way they talk to one another... amongst other things they do together. I love how you managed to add breath-takingly brilliant scenes without changing the character's personalities. You nailed Ianto's personality too, it was easy to believe he had written those things. Thanks so much for writing this, I thoroughly enjoyed it. My one constructive criticism is, I feel like it ended a little to suddenly. I liked the way you ended it, but why right in the middle of the 2nd season? I was looking forward to what Ianto would write when Gwen walked in on him and Jack having sex in the "Adrift" episode, and other amazing scenes in the second season. Also, u never mentioned what happened to Jgem the blue space hamster. Hower, i do understand not wanting to have Ianto write any entries in the "Children of Earth" series ( its depressing, and would be a little absurd to believe Ianto would have time to carry around a diary and write in it while on the run) so, I think it would greatly improve this story, if you finish the second season, (or maybe just a few more because it is sad when Tosh and Owen dies and would be depressing to read and write about, so I wouldn't mind if you skipped that, but I really wanna hear him write about Gwen walking in on them) I would love to also read more of the Ianto and jack moments you made up. But I did love the ending u did, so maybe just finish the second season, then keep the amazing ending you already wrote. Thanks for writing this, I love it!

Okay so I don't normally review a completed story until the last chapter... Bloody annoying getting a review for every chapter that's already been finished so the ideas to help about what could/ will happen are pointless... Anyway, I had to tell you that this chapter was amazing! I love how you stuck Ghost Hunters in there because I love that show :D