That's cool, I like it!

Tom doesn't deserve Myrtle.

This was really a neat pairing! Poor Myrtle...

It's an interesting question though, did Tom know Myrtle at Hogwarts or was she just an accident?

that was interesting :)

and well written ...

good job :)

xx

Liked your story a lot and the fact that it was her diary after all, that's great input. Myrtle was interesting, being a sort of cool (in my opinion) outcast and Tom was very in character and elusive. It wasn't mushy or too tragic in the end. It was as expected. Great work.

Wow...that was good. Really good. Very well written.

Wow. I like it. I've never really thought of this couplet. It's very original.

Ooh, this is great! Very clever indeed how you've included everything we know into this story. I like it alot!

I think you did a great job on here - I think you captured the 'could have been' of this relationship amazingly.

Keep Writing!

Oh, amazing! I love how you integrated the journal, Olive, the basilisk, and... wow, that was... wow!

I loved it! This pairing actually works, somewhat. :D

Strawberry xx