Not bad. Not bad at all. It's actually very good. You're gonna have to updat on this or at the very least let me finish it.

WOAH.

This is freakin' AWESOME.

That's it, I'm referring Lucky to you. She would LOVE this. She's a huge Kingdom Hearts fan.

You will be recieving fangirl squeals within the next day or so.

Yours, Dot.

Shesh. Crossovers, too? My own ultimate brown-nosing aside, you seem to be able to tackle everything. Loving this edition to your essay of sorts. Don't know if you'd consider it, but this would make for a very interesting story on its own. *shrug*

As for the previous chapter, I haven't gotten to the episodes after they encounter their ultimate fanboy... It's really "Lightning Strike"? _

Well, I can't understand your disappointment... What did you expect? Cyclonis going all puffy for Piper instead of ruling the planet? What would YOU have done?

I know what you mean about Lightning Strike's name. WTH, Nerdcorps? O_o

I have come to the conclusion that it must be a nickname (like the Dark Ace). No one in their right mind would name their kid 'Lightning Strike'.

Yay for the Stork/Junko note! I thought maybe I was the only one thinking that after that episode (in which everything Stork did kept screaming IAREFLAMINGLYGAY!). And yes, ReptonSexy with a capital EVERYTHING.

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LOL. I'm confused... How come it's the second series but it goes up to something like episode 44? Don't you restart the numbers like us English? Like Series 2 Episode 3? *bangs head on desk* I'm confused, it was the same as COTT. Anyway you've got some pretty good points! And LOL, screw professilism! Makes it much more fun that way! Anyway... no rant about not giving STARLING a episode yet! *looks around wildly* where is she? LOL. As I said before... good points and keep up the work.. XD

AU's? Oh, this oughta be fun XDD

It's pretty good, though instead of mock-analyzing Snipe's orientation you could just have skipped him and Ravess altogether, as they are just fluff characters.

I suggest/wonder if you are going to update/expand these, given the... insights of the almost-complete new season.

You are one perverted individual, Xekstrin. (but we already knew that) While I would like to point out another appeal to A/MC and DA/P is the morality line they have to cross, I will admit it doesn't beat the hilarious commentary as you broke down MC/P.

It's no question I retain a soft spot for Ravess because of my residual love for her voice actress. But while you say she uses her sexuality as a hammer, I don't see it. Maybe it's just me talking, but I see Ravess as a woman who's absolutely comfortable in her body and her looks. She knows she hot, and that's that. She doesn't go flaunt her looks to gain anything in return, she just -has- them. (totally my kind of woman, btw)

Ooh! Ooh! Do Repton and relationships next! ? (*runs in circles barking like crazy until someone throws a brick at her and it hits her on the head, either knocking her unconscious or killing her. either way, your life is now free of one more pointless neusance.*)

I honestly haven't seen many essays like this, but I really like it! You write about things sensibly and in-character, yet you also retain your own opinions. It also helps me learn a bit more about the Storm Hawks fandom around here, since I haven't gotten around to many fics yet.

Plus, as you put it, I luvz me some green boyz 2.

Keep up the good work!

About MC keeping Piper for the end in ep.27: I think MC knew that Piper would be able to stop the effects of Junko's hypnosis. If she kept her for last, that way the other Storm Hawks would be dead, and only Piper and Junko would survive. And they'd be too depressed to do anything else of course.

We saw some Aerrow & Cyclonis interaction in episode 38 (it just came out so you couldn't have known.

Looking forward to reading more!

I'm interested to see what you have to say next. :D

Lol, this was so funny. I was trying to keep from laughing so hard because my mom is trying to sleep.

I think the funniest was the Snipe and Cyclonis sections of the chapter!

You are awesome at this! Please update soon!