Reviews for Yellow Submarine
IrishDolphin chapter 33 . 6/27
I hadn't logged into my email for awhile but absolutely can NOT wait to go back and reread this story, I've been following it since 2008! I'm so glad that it was finished and can't wait to read more of what you write :)
caro chapter 33 . 6/24
wowww un enorme fic, pero terminado y eso se aprecia aun màs, gracias por escribir
danda jabur chapter 33 . 6/3
i read this fic a loong time ago and it always made me sad that not only it wasnt finished, but it had stoped just when you had oppened a whole new can of worms and left me with the felling that the fic nedded some 10 to 20 chapters to be finished. Im so glad i came across this again to see you finally came back and gave them the happy ending they deserved! this fic is one of the most amazing things i ever read, thank you so much for your work!

one thing that gets me confuse is the fact that harry believes in voldemort when he says he will let ginny go if he lets him kill harry, why would he believe him? (in my head i put it as fact that harry made Tom swear an unbreakable vow or something) and i really wish you had told about nagini, from what harry implies, i understood that ginny was the one that killed it, but how? at least in canon what kills her is the sword of gryffindor with basilisk venon, how would ginny come across a weapon to kill her? i dont imagine they would let her near anything she could use against her rapists.

and i wish you had show us some memories of their interactions from before Malfoy Manor, Harry describes her and how "she treated him with an honest and innocent love that harry had never experienced before" (that line is just so sweet!) and i think she says something along the lines that he was never mean about her crush, even if he was years older then her and would probably be embarassed about it.

but one thing is definitely missing: an outtake on that trio of second years that followed them the entire year and tried to catch harry in the act (of not being harry, i think?) and kept trying to keep Ginny safe from him (they did saved her in the end, just not from what they suspected at first), when they caught him reading that sex book and almost got Harry and Ginny caught in flagrant having sex in his office?! that was hillarious LOL

to know what they been through and then watch as they connect, heal and find happiness, such an emotional ride! thank you!
truthrowan chapter 33 . 5/28
I love this story, I re-read it because of the update, and even on the third read through it still breaks my heart and mends it, all in turn. I'll be patiently waiting for any more updates you decide to make, and I am grateful for to read this wonderfully written story.
cameron1812 chapter 33 . 5/26
Arthur Weasley is the greatest dad to walk the face of the earth.

I. love. this. story. so. much. Will tell you on Discord too, but man I love this story. I remember stumbling upon it years ago and it wasn't finished, and the end result is nothing short of miraculous. I cried. When Ginny came home to the burrow like that on the anniversary night, and then it all led to Arthur and Harry after Harry got Fawkes to save Arnold..., I cried. darn you it's that good.

Thank you.
Olli.Peh chapter 33 . 5/25
Very good story! A bit too graphical for my taste, but I liked the characterization and all the feelings and actions everyone did. Felt very real and comprehensible.
Stephanie O chapter 33 . 5/24
I love that Harry and Ginny got their happy ending, and basically fly off into the "sunset" together! I thought the pygmy puffs as "accessories" of sorts for everyone at the wedding was a fun touch! Why would Arthur be the celebrant instead of Kingsley? Wonderful story! I take it Harry continues to teach at hogwarts? What does Ginny do? It rather implies both of them are teachers, since they gave baby pygmy puffs to their favorite students?
Stephanie O chapter 32 . 5/24
I very much enjoyed the "aftermath" that waited for them at the breakfast table! I wonder if Arthur will ever mention his overly strong silencing spell on Ginny's door...and the entire house?
Stephanie O chapter 31 . 5/24
Seeing Arthur talk with Harry about their love for him brought tears to my eyes. How no one but Arthur noticed that Harry needed a comforting, fatherly hug like that is amazing, but it was truly beautiful to see!
Stephanie O chapter 30 . 5/24
How could Arthur blame Harry after hearing how broken he was upon hearing/seeing what happened to Ginny. I hope someone stops him from hurting Harry! Thank goodness he found Fawkes for Arnold, though!
Stephanie O chapter 29 . 5/24
Why would Slughorn leave them alone together? Hopefully that trio of Gryffs went to get Harry...and I hope Arnold is ok! I'm not surprised Pollus was up to something, though. That Slytherin was not to be trusted!
Stephanie O chapter 28 . 5/24
Wondered when they'd think about contraception...good thing Molly mentioned it! Sure am curious what Arthur's feeling since seeing the "new" Ginny!
Stephanie O chapter 27 . 5/24
Oh man, what I wouldn't give to be a fly on the wall of Harry's office! I'm sure all the Weasleys have hangovers from hell!
Stephanie O chapter 26 . 5/24
Wow, that was hilarious! No wonder Fred saw thru the holes in her story! For a sec I thought Harry would show up there too! I think it's wonderful that she doesn't keep track of the days any more, shows she's healing! I wonder if the 3 second year Gryffs overheard that Slytherin arse Pollus plotting something about Ginny? I hope not...
Stephanie O chapter 25 . 5/24
I got a kick out of how Ginny threatened to hold his things for ransom until he told her about the book...when she already knew about it! He was totally at a disadvantage with her! Wow, that was steamy professor-student role play (really yet not really) on his desk!
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