Reviews for Gunmetal
hershel-ouka chapter 17 . 12/9/2019
Just read this on this year and boii I kinda wish you continue this
selene chapter 17 . 5/10/2018
No wait I changed my mind this story is the most amazing thing ever! Even if it ends here but I hope you decide to continue it I would love to see how Cloud and Leon progress even more
Truly wonderful thank you for writing!
TenkaKumu chapter 17 . 4/5/2018
Wow this story is amazing! I am loving every moment of it! I hope you continue this whenever you get the chance I would love to see how their relationship develops!
Thank you for writing this!
MagsB chapter 17 . 12/16/2017
Well Christmas is right around the corner so I am going to just put this out there in the universe that perhaps a new chapter may be on its way? :D
In all seriousness I adore your writing and your story! I love the build up and everything about this! I will always be hoping for more!
hiccup chapter 17 . 9/7/2017
I love your story and have read it over many times, I adore it and whether you continue it or not just know that I always enjoy rereading it :D
Your writing is spectacular and thank you for taking the time to write it!
tarenH chapter 9 . 8/16/2016
Man I gotta say crossdressing cloud made me laugh much harder than my brother probably appreciated! I can't help but hope the need for him to play a woman again happens I want Leon to have to defend his honor :D
Cant wait for more!

-TH
Taylor chapter 17 . 2/11/2016
This story is amazing! I'm not sure how many times I have read this story through but it is definitely one of my go to stories more so than any other story. So thank you for that first off and Leon and clouds relationship gives me so much good feelings I love them all the more :)

I am glad sora and Cloud were able to make up and fully explain what happened in the past I always have such a soft spot for Zack and hope somehow he is still alive somehow

Leon and Cloud back on the same page! Yes Cloud, let Leon cuddle with you he needs it for healing purposes ;)
Poor Leon always the one getting banged up not so much fun for him!

Thanks again for the writing! It always makes me feel better! I am eagerly waiting for more!
diadyn chapter 17 . 12/24/2015
I kept coming across this fic as I pursued the CLC section, it easily one of the most popular and now I can see why.

I'm glad to have found a story that is actually building a Leon/Cloud relationship instead of starting or stumbling into one.

This is easily one of the best most thought out and novel-like fics I have read. You have some talent for both writing and story weaving.

Unfortunately it has been almost a full year since your last update. But I know how life works and often things like story telling get pushed by the wayside. I myself am coming back into fan fiction after 6 or so odd years so I can't say much.

Anyway, Christmas IS tomorrow...(;

Haha, thanks for this wonderful tale and hopefully we will see an update sometime in the near future.

Also loving all the Disney references! Even the Pixar, I'm catching onto and enjoying them all! 3
silvermoondemon16 chapter 17 . 11/9/2015
I just reread this story twice and realized I nerver left a review for the most recent chapter! Shame on me this story is too good to forget to leave a review! Really though thank you this story is one of epic porportions
I love the little shout out to Rapunzel, Jack Frost, Merida and Hiccup, the story was interesting and I adore those characters so very much! Are you planning on incorporating them more into the story?
Ah Leon and Cloud moments are my favorite, poor Leon is always getting hurt I am curious how it would be if Cloud ended up getting hurt instead of Leon? And Cloud and Sora made up from their misunderstandings so now hopefully everyone is on the same page! Ah the moment when they are just relaxing with each other and enjoying each others company is probably my favorite part :)
Agrabah is next! I am looking forward to it! Thank you again for the story!
MadeInHolland chapter 17 . 1/17/2015
I said it before and I will say it again; I am so glad I re-read this story. The relationship between Cloud and Leon is just perfect, and I am so looking forward on where you'll take it from here on. After many years, I still can't get enough of them! And I am absolutely curious about the rest of the story! What does Roxas want with Sora? Seriously, I am so excited for this! And I loooove that you put Yuffie in here, she has always been of of my favorite characters and it makes me so happy when people incorporate her.
Your story is just a perfect mix of seriousness, humor, suspense and love; I am so grateful you are updating again :)
Yes chapter 17 . 1/11/2015
So happy to see an update! I have the memory of an 80 year old with Alzheimer's, so I admit I've forgotten many details. HOWEVER, that doesn't detract from how much I enjoy seeing you update. Love the dynamics within the group, between the agents and kids and, of course, between Leon and Cloud ;). Looking forward to your next update!
godlet chapter 17 . 1/1/2015
Ahh... I want to give an extensive review, but so much happens in every chapter that I usually completely forget what I was going to say by the time I finish reading! It is always lovely, though, and full of new things to think about. I really like this story.
superlinna chapter 17 . 12/31/2014
are those HTTYD and magi references huhuhu interesting to see where the story is going. also I can't remember if it was revealed in an earlier chapter but I'm guessing it's roxas who wants to meet sora
sidka chapter 16 . 9/20/2014
You just made my day when I realized this was updated! I cant believe it and it was so good! I just reread the entire thing and fell in love all over again! Thank you so much for updating you have no idea how happy you made me!
Kuroneko Hikage chapter 16 . 8/20/2014
So here I am, browsing through Cleon fanfiction, when I notice that my search results brought up your story pretty darn quickly and close to the top. The fangirl squeal came after I saw that you updated so recently. Hell. Yes. And a very Happy Birthday to this story as well! (Unbirthday if it's not.) I had to reread everything because I forgot where I left off, and it felt like I was going on an epic journey all over again the second time I read through it. (I can't tell you how many times each and every chapter compelled me to search (*coughrapecough*) dA for fanart.)

And thus this chapter brings the exciting Olympia portion to a close! The addition of Yuffie is great, I love her character! In fact, I love all of your characters! You have this uncanny ability to keep everyone in their own head, and not deviate into clichés. OhMiGosh, Leon and Cloud were kicking so much $$, and Cloud was in his KH1 outfit... *_* I want to draw a few scenes now, but unfortunately, I'm not that good an artist... XD

I'm with Kairi - Where, indeed, are we headed next? I can't wait! XD I'll be anticipating the next chapter with open arms! Thank you for all your hard work, it is much appreciated! -Bows- The entertainment, as always with you, was fun to read!

-Kuro
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