Aw, man. I want more. Excellent sruff!

I like your Elementals and how you have incooperated them into the story. I'm a little sad over the fact that it seems unlikely that you will update anytime soon :(

As for your question why so few write reviews: I often read when I'm on a mobile device making typing longer text cumbersome. Other times I'm so engrossed in the story that I just want to read on, skipping from chapter to chapter without taking the time to pause a moment and write my thoughts down.
I came here after You left a comment on my story :) knowing that you are still around gives me hope that you might continue.

I have just now come upon your story. I think it is very good, but notwithstanding your promise to update regularly, it is still not finished. Why is it, that people set up and write a beautiful story and then abandon it not far from the conclusion? I am disappointed. Yes, you write for free. Yes, you write only for yourself, but why then post it for people to read?

Lily Ossendrijver

I an very saddened that this had been abandoned. On all Websites too :(
it's a wonderful fic and I hope it will be adopted by a loving author.

It's great for Harry have emotional and physical support unlike Dumbledore who only interest in the war effort less in the well being of said child under his so called loving care. The professors didn't do their jobs either all if not most judge him based on who his parents or his title as the boy-who-lived is and not the effort of himself as a orphan. Most if not all only see a famous person and forget that HE IS StILL A CHILD who is orphaned at age of one. Most if not all not willing to stand up for him and single him out like the students. The mass of the people of the wizard world didn't care who they hurt as long as they got what they wanted and willing to bend a child who they only care about his title and willing to forget He is a child to achieve their own ends. Dumbledor is a adult when the reporter told bunch lies to the mass he should of tried to protect Harry from such backlash but he didn't do his job. He let them have a piece of him without remorse.

What they fail to see or willing to forget is that Harry James Potter is a child raised by muggles and he know nothing about wizard world. He should be protected and not be single out just because who he may related to. It doesn't mean he is exactly like his parents since they never raise him and he doesn't remember them except for the part where they got killed. With friends like Ronald Weasely, and Hermione Granger both have self confidence issues did not help Harry one bit except made him bend to their will of comfort. With the way how Dulsey treated and raised Harry it didn't help his self-esteem either to dealt with the masses. None of them willing to see past who Harry may be or who he related to especially Minvera who saw what the Dulsey family is like and didn't bother to check on him like she should of with doubt about this type of family to leave Harry into without a by your leave. She blindly follow Dumbledore's suggestion or order without delay to even think of the consequences of her inactions to this type of situation. She still willing to single out a student and judge him baseless.

I have a question why did Harry acted zoom out when fighting bunch of death eaters that he couldn't tell allies from enemies until his adopted mom told him otherwise? (this happens when they held a conference) Isn't dangerous to be like that and what happens if he were to fight side by side with allies will he mistake it for enemies while fighting or he have some ways like the aura of the person to tell who is a death eater and who isn't?

Ron probably realized this improved Harry is not the old Harry who willing to sacrifice his own happiness for the sake of others. Hermione may be a lot of things but she still have some issues with information gathering or who she willing to man handle to get it. It kind of remind me a milder version of that bug reporter. It's great to see Severus able to lift that blind fold from his eyes to see reality not live in the past. What happened to remus is he still in the mission of convincing the werewolves to join the light?

What a refreshingly different take on the potter life. _

looking forward to what's to come.

Go Go SevxHarry 3

Oh my gawd! Laughed so hard! Love this! Looking forward to your next update! ;)

Wonderful coming out for Harry. Thanks for the update.

I am enjoying your story. It was intriguing that Severus was so attracted to the smell of the potion with Harry's hair in it...kind of reminded me of what the Amortentia potion smells like to a person.

Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!

I never liked Ron.

please update soon? i love it so far.

I like the way harry handles his interactions with the "old coot" can't wait to read next chapter

i enjoyed the scene between minerva and sev, nicely done.

Great story. I love how Dumbles is failing at his attempts to manipulate! Can't wait to find out what happened to Draco!