Aw, that was so sweet! *squeals with Penelope* Of course, he had to wake up and finally tell her how he felt about her. :) I really liked your last chapter!

Awe...how sweet! That was really good. Thanks for writting it! :)

Another great chapter! :)

i loved it you did a fine job, even if your muse did take a hike.

I like the ending. All is as it should be in the universe. Now if only Criminal Minds could get with the program and see what all the majority of their fans want. This was a really good story and I really enjoyed it. Thanks.

What an update! Fran taking care of Penelope is so sweet! And of course, she knows her son way better than anyone. (And I loved that you brought in the fact that Penelope is all he's talking about when with his family.)

And, oh, the last sentence! That was so heart-warming. Great chapter, as usual!

I do so hope he will wake up soon. He and Pen were so meant to be together. His Mom is so wise and knows her son so well. I love the way you write her.

This was such an emotional chapter. I loved the part where he is talking with his dad. Pen is so in love with him and he with her. They were just meant to be together. Good job on this chapter.

OMG I love this story! I love how he gets to speak to his Dad. I love that he's torn between his loved one's. Please keep writing I can't wait to see how he handles this. On a side note, what if his father showed him what life for Penelope would be like without him?

Awe...that was so sweet! I loved it! :)

Oh, how beautiful! I totally love the near-death-experiences. :) And I especially loved this one. You did a very great job writing it!

What a great chapter! stuck between the two place. His dad is right he should be with his Baby girl right now.

I really like the story so far. I can't wait to read the next chapters. Please hurry and write more. keep up the great work.

How wonderful for Pen to find Derek's mom waiting to give her some comfort. The mom is such a strong woman and she can see past her pain to reach other to others. You do such a good job on showing the characters, their strengths, weakness and their love for one another.

Reid being forceful shows the level of emotion going through the group. Kevin is the only one to hold responsibility in this and it took Reid to be able to get across to Pen. Good chapter.