In chapter 2, Edward's girlfriend was named Ashley. Did I miss him breaking it off with her? Or did you just randomly change her name in the story?

when r u gonna post the sequel? I love your story! it was AMAZING! please write more!

Awwe, sounds like a lovely title. :] Hope to hear more soon about the sequel!

Update soon,

Kolored.

I think the title My Angel sounds really good for this story. It sounds really good in general actually. I love it. 8D

NO!

That's like the worst thing you can do to a couple...she has to let them adopt the baby!

loved this chapter! so cute

Edward is my angel.

I still think it should be angel.

Eve

yay! update soon! good luck with school P

That story was awesome. haha. Its all I have been doing all day. Well and homework but that was only when my mom was in the room. lol. I thought it was funny at the part where Bella went out with Jason and Edward went out with Jessica because my name is Jess and my brother's name is Jason. And my brother is a creep. I wouldn't be surprised if he did end up becoming a player and raping someone. He is such a creep. *shudder* and so was the one in this story. I am glad that you waited so long to get Edward and Bella together because nobody gets together right away. I mean really. It was pretty bad that he met her when she was in the hospital though. That's not very good. Oh and I love the name's Kayla and Cade. I think it was terrible that Bella had to find out she was raped because she was pregnant. That was terrible. I am so glad that there is going to be a sequel. I can not wait to read that. Anyway, I loved the whole scene with the cookies. haha. Edward covered in flour. 8D Oh and when they kissed was good to. And the party in this chapter. haha. That's Alice and Rose for ya. lol. XD

That story was awesome. haha. Its all I have been doing all day. Well and homework but that was only when my mom was in the room. lol. I thought it was funny at the part where Bella went out with Jason and Edward went out with Jessica because my name is Jess and my brother's name is Jason. And my brother is a creep. I wouldn't be surprised if he did end up becoming a player and raping someone. He is such a creep. *shudder* and so was the one in this story. I am glad that you waited so long to get Edward and Bella together because nobody gets together right away. I mean really. It was pretty bad that he met her when she was in the hospital though. That's not very good. Oh and I love the name's Kayla and Cade. I think it was terrible that Bella had to find out she was raped because she was pregnant. That was terrible. I am so glad that there is going to be a sequel. I can not wait to read that. Anyway, I loved the whole scene with the cookies. haha. Edward covered in flour. 8D Oh and when they kissed was good to. And the party in this chapter. haha. That's Alice and Rose for ya. lol. XD

i liked this chapter!

oh and please put a thingy up on this story whenever you make the the sequel! so that i can read it

You should rename this Angel, it would go so much better than your current one. No offense meant, though!

Eve

Aw! That was so amazing!

I loved it! It was funny, nice, lovely, so many things!

I'd love if u wrote a sequel! ;)

This was one of my fav stories, you know?

The gifts u got were amazing, I got a new IPOD, a new cell phone, clothes, a chain and a brazalet (is the spelling correct?), sorry my spelling is really bad, and some other things :D I love X'mas!

Luv ya, Abby

Awesome! Looking forward to a sequel for sure! :)

This story was amazing and I can't wait for more! I loved this chapter, I've been in a dancing mood just now, listening to 3OH!3. :]