WAIT WHAT ITS NOT COMPLETE YET? MYGHAD this is gooddamn fic

It's also not very consistent right now, as - in the previous chapter - you made it look like Sakura only gets to know Sasuke at the academy, and now (in this chapter), they seemed to be going to the same high school...

It does not "suck". Nor is it extremely perfect. (As in, nothing's perfect...you should know that, right?)

I like this story. It's well written in places, does not drag on for too long in certain parts. And has good humor. Something's that actually funny.

Although: I have a few qualms with it. Firstly, with how much Naruto is in love with Sakura, it's hard to believe he could fall for Sasuke. Although, I really should read the next chapters before saying this. Maybe you managed to pull it off. (Still, you're only making it harder on yourself by asserting a strong bond of hatred between Naru & Sasu, AND a massive (lifetime) love for Sakura (on Naruto's side))...

Secondly, (if you still want to continue this fic), you might want to edit it. It's great now as it is, but it could be even better. (Just mainly the flow of words... - some things could be worded shorter- editing always involves a lot of cutting)

How's college? ;-) Do you still have time to read fanfics?

First I must say, Yes Naruto that behavior is completly normal XD I can do that for hours on end untill I desperatly have to use the bathroom.

And dude i siriously love your stories! And when I realise when I've reached the last chapter available I find myself cursing at the screen and hope for updates to magicly start appearing. I really hope you find yourself a beta and find time to start updating! But if you can't, please say so and don't just disapear into oblivian and leave your readers wondering where the hell you went xD

Rofl, you bet! Ever since I became addicted to yaoi, my bladder has turned into steel XD

I love this fic, I hope it gets updated some day soon :)

This is BRILLIANT! Why on heaven's earth, did you not see this fit to continue?This is great! I really do hope that you continue it sometime in the near future!

this was so cute i realy want to read more. please update.

steve

This is so funny! XD Evil Kakashi, you tainted Naruto. -_-'''

I have a sneaking suspicion the Sharigan guy is Sasuke and he just further corrupted Naruto. T_T

Why aren't you updating! :(

*giggles insanely like some eccentric yaoi fangirl whom should be chained,frozen and locked up* Teehee, Naru-chan's imagining about BL. Awesome, you just made my day! (Should it be called night? it's 12:24AM here...hmm...)

Sasuke's published works & his unpublished private BL ones seem different; if Naru-chan can become addicted to it :3. Without the thinking of it being a self-destructing story; (or does that only apply to girl/boy? :x. )

Awesome job on the story; and I should really stop blabbering...

Oyasuminasai des,

Usagi-Tama.

NO!YOU JUST HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS OR I WILL DIE! DO YOU WANT MY DEATH ON YOUR CONSCIENCE? PLEASE UPDATE!

I have gone and read everyone one of your Naruto works and LOVE is not even a strong enough word to describe how much I ADORE your work.

The way to write Naruto is just so absolutely in character and he cracks me up! I literally burst out laughing sometimes and say the words out loud because it makes me laugh even more.

I love your writing. It's a talent and this work (and every other I've read) makes me smile.

Thanks for the chapters :)

Hahahaha, I love the scene when Naruto started reading mansmex XD But after reading that little snippet of Sasuke's novel I also don't get what was so good about it (-_-;) I can't wait to see what happens when Naruto asks Sakura out!

Dang you and having not updated this since '08, its really good and I want to keep reading but I can'tttt

I liked how secret-sasuke's stories were basically about the two of them haha it was pretty fun

You probably won't continue this but it was great to read even though only four chapters. Good story

uugh i love this story! So please please update! And your 'Disadvantaged Children' is really awsome too of course.

So keep working hard 'cause i'm looking forward to reading the rest of your stories :))

aw~

our little sasuke is a prev

lmao

he must have been in love with naruto for a long time lol

its so cute *.*