That disclaimer is very self-deprecating and funny. ( Ps. I very seriously doubt anybody is scouring this website looking for fanfics that don't have a disclaimer.)

This was a good read a pity it will never be finished though.

I've never read a femnaru x tentative story but the pairing is quickly becoming my 3rd fav. My favorite being femnaru x kakashi then Femnaru x shikamaru.

have you given up on the story

Ahhhh, I remember this fic. *Tear* It was soooo good. Sigh, well I will wait for your return, maybe? I hope so you are a fantastic author!

I suppose you're not updating this anymore. It's a pity because I kinda liked this.

for the love of god write another chapter! This one of the best fem Naruto stories I've read! and the way you've portrayed Temari is so ... believable? realistic? i don't know how to describe it, but like mcdonald's,
"I'm loving it".

why did you stop this? it saddens me.

Not easy to find good fics along these line. Hope you'll pick this up again eventually

All I can say is amazing.

...um...HOT

Lol temari the sadist

Nice seems realy interesting lol

Ch.2

In one word, readable.

Hook, high grade.

Plot, none yet.

Spelling, you found the spell check.

Grammar, you abused the spell check; poor word choice, i.e. homonyms clutter the first 2 chapters at least, comma use is incorrect.

I am enjoying this story, though the submissive Naru is a little out of character in my mind. I would much like to see it finished.