that was good keep the chapters coming

Can you please update hate to see a good well written crossover fanfiction die out

this is good you should make more

It was great!
You should update it! :3
Thanks for the chap
Hope u can update soon
Have a nice day!

-bonks u- finish i like this story :D

You have an awesome story here.

Always wanted to see a good Naruto/Tenjho Tenge crossover. This is probably the best one on this site, it's really gritty and very descriptive. It reminds me a lot of the Tenjho Tenge manga, yet there is a lot of differences. I always-ed loved how gritty, real, and gory the manga was. And your doing a great job on combining the stories.

Also I am quite happy with the pairings. You don't need to add anyone else into it. Both Maya and Aya are more then enough. Can't wait to see what happens in the future with them.

On a technical level your Grammar and spelling is quite nice. Only some minor mistakes here and there. It's a lot better then most of the crap on this site, so your story is a nice breath of fresh air. Also your detailing is nicely done. The fight scenes and the descriptions are amazing.

I just hope that you start updating this story really soon. I can't wait to see what happens with the Chunin Exams and all that.

Keep up the great work, and I hope you update soon!

nice story can u come out with more chapters please the story is just beastie

i really want to know when it will be off hiatus tis is the ultimate crossover of naruto/tenjho tenge ever. PLZ HURRY AND CONTINUE it.

Awesome story! Can't wait for more! Hope it starts back up again!

I sincerely hope you update soon. I have been reading this story every three months since the last update to keep it fresh in my mind and in hopes of a new chapter. I didn't see any spelling errors and it really flowed together.

please conitnue it! :D

MayaXNarutoXAya :D

I'm liking this alot. It's been some time since you last updated though. I do hope that you do continue this story. It's freaking badass.

Will Naruto meet Bunshichi or Mitsuomi. Or any of the other various Tenjho Tenge characters later? And if so, who else will he fight? And how will his fellow genin and everyone else react to his new look and abilities when he takes part in the chunin exams?

I am really looking forward to when (or if) you update this.

Good story, will naruto get Reiki? hope you update soon

this has to be the best story i have ever read please update soon i can't wait any longer.

This is a great story. It's an interesting concept having Naruto use Souichiro's power, since they both have similar characteristics and childhoods. I hope you update soon. I can't wait to see Naruto's reaction, and everyone elses', when Aya kisses him and asks to marry him.