Reviews for The Prodigy's Ascension |
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NulledVoid chapter 1 . 4/18 good |
WeisseHex chapter 3 . 4/4 Awesomeness! |
WeisseHex chapter 1 . 4/4 Loved it! |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/20 Wait, what? How is Harry ‘stuck with’ them? Didn’t Dumbledore, like, just say he can go wherever he wants? |
CheddarTrek chapter 10 . 12/6/2019 That list! I’m surprised I didn’t read this back in the day. Mostly skimming right now - it hasn’t aged super well - but it’s an AU and I like those. I’m curious what your ending/climax was. |
CheddarTrek chapter 4 . 12/6/2019 Some of the students even fainted! Not to mention Harry’s exchange with Albus at the table. Hahaha |
CheddarTrek chapter 3 . 12/6/2019 Oh man. The tropes and cliches. |
CheddarTrek chapter 1 . 12/6/2019 That was good but clearly your writing has improved since you wrote this. |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/24/2019 The fuck is this sad excuse of a fic, |
Jestersky98 chapter 7 . 11/19/2019 This came out of nowhere and frankly was pretty damn bad |
Jestersky98 chapter 8 . 10/19/2019 What is this pathetic attemp at a fanfic? You had our Harry read all the books in Potter Library which were in the thousands yet he has 2nd-3rd year knowledge? Either you’re stupid or you’re neglecting to actually write that Harry is trying, very poorly to have his abilities hidden Frankly this is a disgrace to the HP franchise |
SeriousFicc chapter 48 . 8/17/2019 Spectacularly mediocre. Not the worst I've come across, in all fairness, but by no means anywhere near the best. But I suppose this is one of the harder premises, in the HP Fandom, to write about (interestingly, at least). While not a masterpiece, it is still good practice, and that is one of the things fanfiction is all about, right? Keep writing, and try to draw out key plot points a little more and smooth out chunky plot exposition. This will just increase the flow of the story and make it feel a little less forced. |
CTDreader chapter 7 . 8/4/2019 I see only ONE flaw. Wouldn't a death eater's skill degrade gradually in prison? |
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 48 . 5/12/2019 A great story here! |
Tenjo chapter 7 . 5/6/2019 Wut. This battle came out of literally nowhere and your prodigy is fluctuating between totally amazing and utterly shit. |