damn it you're so mean and your cliffhangers are awfull but still awesome book but cime on please more updates and hope you're gonna finish the book .

the story so fawesome please update it I can't wait for more

Awww... I’m a bit sad that this was left incomplete, in truth, this is one of my favourites. I really like how you made the AU fit with all the characters and how detailed this was. It’s been a looong time since you updated, and I have a feeling you long since stopped reading these, but I really want to thank you for writing this. Every time I had a minute to spare, I would always come back to here and it helped me get through a long day. Even though this isn’t finished, it was still a fun read, thank you.

I really like this story but could you please not add all the comments at the top it becomes really annoying and makes me want to stop reading if you want to put comments its best to do so at the bottom of each chapter

brilliant!~~

Can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the great work :) Love this fic!

You have to update this... like..'asap...!

Very well written piece of work. Love the tension and in general - the plot. I think it's different and I'm glad that the "romance" between Naruto and Itachi is building slowly - makes it more realistic.

Sooo... update please! Can't wait to see what happens next

listen, I'm sorry if this review is going to sound a bit harsh- thats just my opinion, and it probably isn't the same opinions as any one else- the intention is not to hurt, but to transmit my thoughts:
im glad this was the last chapter posted, because I wouldn't have continued it reading otherwise. I started loving the fic- the action, the sexual tension, even itachi's unstableness and everything that came with his jealousy. however, this last scene had me EXTREMELY disappointed. I only hope you can somehow change it if you plan on continuing it, but setting such a tone throughout the fic and suddenly dropping a non-con, explicit BOMB without any warnings whatsoever, especially because readers have been expecting this confrontational, at least kissing and at best making love scene- was completely out of line. it was rough, uncalled for and utterly WRONG to have their first time like this. what the hell happened? are you even happy with this fic? we had such high hopes!

i'm waiting for your update :D

urgh... so frustrating.. when you overthinking and dont know what supposed/must to do. this situation.. can drive someone go insane. no wonder Itachi assume too much to reassure himself.

element of suspense are too much in this chapter. XD my heart beats so fast.

I hate you
I hate you so much
either you finished it like that
or you stopped updating
I don't know which I hate more

Update please!

This was really good - I love the plot. :D
I wasn't expecting the ending though... Itachi, how could you?!
Hope to be able to finish reading this. :D

I wished you updated this story, its freaking amazing!