Great story. Thanks for sharing.

The identity of Fulcrum command is one I always enjoy. It means he usually gets what is coming to him, no dodging consequences.

Astonishing. Everyone is just unbelievable. Sarah so weak, Chuck jealous? Trish gets a last bang before giving his ring back. Surely now it's a parody:-)
So much fun when there is no one left to root for.

And yet you will reward the little creep and go Chara. At least now we know that if she goes near him again after that they will both deserve the other, better a single dysfunctional relationship than two other unfortunate people getting screwed. So Carina has a more magic set than Sarah - able to effortlessly brush a fiance aside.

Too much. Chuck is an asshole, mid twenty professionals are poking their tongues out at each other and seasoned military officers are running around scared of, and pathetically capitulating to, grossly inappropriate behavior from a set of obviously magic breasts.
At least the story is interesting.

Interesting chapter and plot and idea

AWESOME STORY

Absolutely wonderful story. Thank you for writing it.

I love this, really great work

This is so AU! Chuck the cheat and Sarah the betrayed lover! *cackling* It's so much fun!

loved it

Really enjoyed this, was a very entertaining AU that was handled really well. Didn't expect it to lead into the pilot episode, but that was pretty cool twist. Would love to read a sequel to this someday if you ever do write one. Anyway, great fic, definitely one of the best on here.

Great story! I really liked it.

Loved the story, but chuck was kinda a douche to sarah, but still, a great story :)

Bloody Awesome story. Kind wish it were a series though