Reviews for Clenching Water
TekoloKuautli chapter 6 . 6/18
I'm so glad we got a happy ending, if the original had memory wipes or death I would have raged here.

Aww Youko finally got to show his own side of affection, I almost felt bad that Kurama kept the guy hidden and at bay. As if he didn't trust Youko with Kagome. Sure, the fox mentioned killing rivals without remorse but I doubt he would have gone through with it if they saw the girl happy with whomever it was.

Now I kind of want to read more, like would they really go to ancient China? Reikai is involved on the case so they'll know of the jewel before Kagome can make something for her love to cross over and he has to make plans and excuses for going missing while in the middle of school.

Anyway, I loved it and definitely loved that it was a finished story!
TekoloKuautli chapter 5 . 6/18
Pff- I'm happy Kagome slapped Kurama silly so hard even Inuyasha has complained that it hurts. And he got a healthy dose of jealousy too. A good day all in all XD
TekoloKuautli chapter 4 . 6/18
Talk about a hell of a reunion between ex's. I bet if they hadn't spooked her, both Kurama's presence and hurtful summary of their relationship and Hiei's invasion of her mind, they would be making up right now.
TekoloKuautli chapter 3 . 6/18
Well... I can't say I'm surprised at Kurama and Youko's behavior. I'm only glad they are suffering! How dare they make Kagome this sad. At least she is getting more time with her friends in the past.
TekoloKuautli chapter 2 . 6/18
I never thought he would pull the Edward card, I mean, unless he figured she has been attacked by youkai because he was near her but then he would know that she knew about it too. So why? Agh! Stupid Kurama! The tittle of the chapter matches, altruist's folly indeed.
TekoloKuautli chapter 1 . 6/18
Aww love how Kurama is shy and insecure in contrast of Youko, he's still very much a human teenager. And Kagome, well, she's cute. I like how she's giving herself a chance even if only to defy Inuyasha's taunts and expectations but she's not using Kurama or anything, just wanting to go on a normal date that she could enjoy without pushy friends hooking her up with a bland guy.
laelruin chapter 6 . 6/30/2018
LOL! Would have been so much easier if they'd just come out and told each other. Now I want to see Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha from this era...
EllaJuroku chapter 6 . 5/29/2016
I was wondering if you could write a Sequel to this story.
Deadpool-girl chapter 6 . 6/11/2015
Loved the story, kinda disappointed that the only sex mentioned was between Kurama and some other girl; I kinda expected it to happen between Kagome and Kurama as well, or at least hinted at. Though I would love a sequel
Burn-in-the-sun chapter 6 . 5/17/2014
Well I am very glad that it ending with a happily ever after! I loved how their relationship progressed, their romance was adorable. Thanks so much for posting!
LunaEchoWillow chapter 6 . 1/12/2014
Cute!
Jayne chapter 4 . 11/19/2012
please update this i love it and want to read more
Vixen Uchiha chapter 6 . 8/24/2012
will there be a sequel? I mean this was so good and it calls for a sequel I would like to see the trip the china and how inu takes it
MidnightReader1 chapter 6 . 8/5/2011
Loved the story and loved the ending haha love how Inuyasha got into the scene:) Really enjoyed the story overall and I love how Kurama got the last word. Looking forward to reading your next story:) xx
Pumpkin Maximus chapter 6 . 5/22/2011
Aw! That was an awesome ending! w This story is so sweet. I loved it. Thank you so much for posting.
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