lol! the ending was priceless

My God, that was well-written. Such an odd occurance, yet you kept all of the characters in-character. Or at least in my opinion. Anyway, love Rick and Kai. Nice fic. Hope you do more like this one.

Gosh, I don't know how to begin! This story is priceless! :D It's got a very nice tone, very well written, and I like the idea of Rick and Kai actually getting along for once. And that was the best ending ever!

Hey, great stuff you got here! I really like both Rick and Kai, so it's nice to see them get along for once. The characters were really well written, and it was nice to see Popuri written as someone other than a mindless ditz. Nice to see her actually having grown up, but still written in character.

Oh, and the ending? Hilarious.

-Jersey

Ooh. /Lovely/ work on this. I like the awkward lack of camaraderie and the tentative truce between the guys, and Rick's slightly neurotic yet touching attachment to his baby sister versus Kai's easy, friendly affection for her. Your dialogue is fun and snappy, too, and the look into Kai's head was entertaining. This was a pleasure to read...

...and fifty points for the ending. I literally hooted with surprised laughter. :)