Reviews for Master of the guild |
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Guest chapter 26 . 2/8 YOU SUCK AT WRITING YOUR WORDS ARE ALL MESSED UP FIX YOUR STORIES |
Guest chapter 11 . 11/24/2018 Man I thought I wasn't gonna really like this But you proved me wrong |
lavi-kitsune chapter 27 . 9/10/2018 I am loving this story. It is quite satisfying. Looking forward to reading more |
Eden Glorian chapter 27 . 1/16/2018 Another Unfinished good story abandoned by it's spineless writer, i am heavy dissapointed. |
rhizz17 chapter 27 . 3/11/2016 Update please |
Laxer30 chapter 7 . 8/26/2015 Grammer man, it exists for a reason. All of your tenses are mixed up. The story seams choppy because of it. |
Aqua Rules chapter 27 . 7/17/2015 Argh! Why was this one not finished? Such an awesome premise and story line too. :( |
TotalyAnonymous chapter 10 . 3/4/2014 Yeah this story has a lot of potential admit but honestly and truthfully and I don't mean to flame here but... YOUR GRAMMAR FUCKING SUCKS! Like who the fuck taught you English? You write like a fucking third grader! again sorry but get a BETA reader or something or at least give the story to someone who can fix the story. Character development is shitty, your grammar is fucked, shits happening WAY to fast for the reader to understand how characters got from point A to point B, and lastly why do you write decently in your author notes but not in the story? I mean what the fuck? Hell your story's Summary is better written than your story! Sincerely, TotalyAnonymous PEACE OUT! |
ThaviduZeroX chapter 11 . 11/30/2013 Hey Vendetta419, are you ever going to finish this fanfic and all of your other fanfics that are still in progress? |
luketzoner chapter 27 . 8/14/2012 man , now this is a great fic too bad you stoped , do you thiks you will ever continue it ? |
Kithrin chapter 27 . 9/4/2011 It's OK and worth reading, but 90% of names are not capitalized, and a lot of missing words are present. |
120991ln chapter 27 . 7/3/2011 continue loving it |
Soulless Neo Shadow chapter 27 . 6/24/2011 Dude this fanfic scared the crap out of me I liked it but yea |
feral93 chapter 13 . 5/30/2011 love this story but fix the spelling |
Bloodreaver Alpha chapter 7 . 1/14/2011 ...*shakes head* Just stop writing. You can't even use English correctly, your grammar and syntax sucks, and your spelling is just painful. You don't even capitalize proper nouns! Stop writing! |