But it dishonors Sarah for Buffy to leave the painting...

Brilliant! I can also see what Spike meant when he said that, too. Very awesome and neat. :)

Keep up your super-neat, phenomenal and creatively cool writing! :)

mostly it just seemed rather incoherent.

the ending rather sucked. buffyverse dracula is still around by the by.

You're using wander when you should be using wonder.

I love the story, and have added it to my C2

This should probably be in the Buffy the Vampire Slayer section.

Great story..but I think it should maybe be rated higher than PG-13. It gets pretty...expressive in some parts. Good story nonetheless.

Interesting take on what Spike meant.

I take it Dracula is dead now?

I enjoyed this, I thought you did this very well.