What a great way to start off the chapter. Next chapter I hope)

More? Is there more? I demand more! It's really good, write more. :)

For some reason, my favorite line is "I kind of hate boxing", lol.

You really do a great job building up the atmosphere of a boxing match. There's this sort of adrenaline filled claustrophobia that really shines through the writing. You write Jimmy really well, and I can't wait to read more of this!

GASP. It's finally on FFdotnet! Yay! Now I can review it... Okay, first of all the first chapter is awesome. Everyone's in character! YAY! Okay, brain not functioning well in morning. Need to get dressed for school. Bye!