hey, i think you should re-write it, because im kinda confused , like some of its rather unclear. PLEASE. otherwise, the story line is good but im still hell confused

o! i like the second one! loving the story! :)

Haha! I love it when she disses people!

Lexi.

Ok..UPDATE! Actually awsome story!:D

I like that she is with someone other than Edward. Edward always gets the girl and after a while those fics just get so common and boring. And I think I like Channing better.

o good cliff hanger, yes I've sensed the difference because I have to keep going back to the chapters before hand. I confuse myself and read to many fanfics lol Does Channing look like Channing Tatum or whatever his name is 'cause his gorgeous :).

AMAZING! Update soon, PLEASE! LOVE THIS!

aw... please hurry up and update. i likr this story and i want to know how it ends. the parts that dont make sence are the ones the just skip. also at the start of the chapter, can you please write whose point of wiew its in. and at the start of the next chapter can you put a list up the top of all the charactgers and who they are with? it would make it alot easier. other then that the grammer war good and there were very few mistakes. -xoxo

it's really good, i think you could perhaps make it a bit clearer who's talking where, but apart from that it's brilliant!

i don't know what it is about this story, but i feel happy that someone is making edward suffer horribly. if that's what you're doing, it seems like it to me. I LOVE IT! bella deserves someone other than edward.

um ok i feel kinda sad for those ppl that wud immediately jump to that conclusion but: yay! i love your story! write more! o and just for the record id kinda like it if she wud get bak at him. like not by being with anyone else, because they were obviously meant for each other but i hate the stories were she just forgives him after all he put her thru.

Keep writing!

update soon please.

Is there more plese says theres more

i like it so far make more quickly plz!