Reviews for Harry Potter Mercenary |
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odonnellzoo99 chapter 1 . 6/15 In a story with many dark themes, I found Luna being held prisoner and a DE plaything for 3 months the most disturbing. IMO this is better written then many of a similar type. So many have a Harry that acts more like a socially awkward, immature, idiotic Harry, instead of a betrayed and damaged Harry. This Harry may be sarcastic and a prankster, but you didn't punishing the readers with longwinded and repetitious rants. Well done and thank you. |
anifis chapter 1 . 5/17 Brilliant story. One of the best I read in the last few month. Please keep writing. |
LoneWolf0729 chapter 1 . 5/6 Fucking amazing! Loved it, want a sequel. |
GatorLHA2 chapter 1 . 5/3 Lovely in many ways |
Caliban03 chapter 1 . 4/17 Thank you for your story But i would have liked to know if Teddy (and maybe Gaby) would have joined our lovebirds in the end |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6 Puré stupidity, moronic recomendation not that anything was spected from the moronic writer. Every stupid writer that pair Hermione with a weasle is simple a moronic gay not lesbian. And deserve all the crap the world sent them. |
Flygar chapter 1 . 3/31 ... Daphne is nearly 100% an agent reporting his every move to the ministry and he falls in love with her? Wheres his paranoia? Doesnt mesh with his character at all |
Flygar chapter 1 . 3/31 aaaand you confirmed the Ministry uses the imperious as a matter of protocol, I'd be so fast out of dodge it isnt even funny |
aries12345251 chapter 1 . 3/6 trash he already knows he can't trust dumbledork but he still did what a trashy fic |
Qul chapter 1 . 2/3 Great! love he ended up with Daphne at the end |
stevem1 chapter 1 . 1/19 Excellent story. I think the poster from Nov. 10 has some deep seated personal issues that need to be dealt with. |
Sleepyhawk502 chapter 1 . 1/17 Great story, thanks for sharing! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/7 Awesome story Well done |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/22/2019 Brilliant. Just brilliant. |
ShadeslayerX chapter 1 . 12/22/2019 This was exceedingly funny. Good work |