You are aware that World War II didn't during the Victorian era right? Like no where near it? It started in 1939 and ended in 1945

Emily would have teleported to the church and would not have runed to the church.

There wouldn't be any weeks till their wedding. They would have been married already. Barkis wouldn't be in the land of the dead any more. Maudeline would be jail.

Why is Victoria still living in her house!? She should be living with Victor. Victor and Victoria are married the next day. The police show up at Victoria's house and arrest Maudeline and Finis.

Omg please continue this!

Bravo! I really want to read some more!

Awww they got together and now they were ripped apart- AGAIN! Pleeeease you gotta continue! One more chappy...? Anyway, this was awesome, and I'm impressed at how you displayed the characters emotions and thoughts and such. You are awesomeness.

Keep writing!

~Anthea Triton~

Ok not cool, that was really mean to Victoria and I really dont think that she would slap the Corpse Bride!

lol the last chapter was unexpected. "final peace my ass!" haha xDD keep on writing i find this story very interesting ]

Ok, I'm reviewing all the chapters here. ;)

I like this story a lot! please don't leave us hanging like that!

And if Tim Burton ever did a sequel, I think that this one would have been great!

I really like your writting style, too. Um, I know how it must have been feel to get bored or something on one of your stories, that happened to me. But I'm still going to finish it, for my readers *Nods head and puts hand above heart*.

I've always felt bad for Emily, and even though she left Victor to be with Victoria, I always said that she diserved her happily ever after.

Please, keep writting this! You have fans here! Lol.

-XxBloodyredrosexX

Oh, it's one whole YEAR after the movie... okay, I guess that works. Silly me. :-)

The main criticism from me here (and I do hope I am not offending you-sorry if I have or am) is the transition from Victoria back to Emily. In the movie, he IS shown to have a love and preference for Victoria-after all, he wanted to be with her, and he married Emily by accident. If he were to discover that Emily really was his "true love," so to speak, I think his transition would be slower. Maybe months or years... unless that's the time skip in this story? Maybe I missed somthing...

But, that's just my opinion on the matter. It's love, and it can be wacky and sometimes unpredictable, right?

I dunno... as much as I would have liked for Victor to be with Emily, I would hate for poor Victoria to be alone, or worse-stuck with evil old Barcus. Oh, tough triangle.

Anyhow, make sure to keep a careful eye on grammar, spelling, and sentence structure (mustn't have fragments or run-ons). I don't think you really had a problem with any of these, but still... :-)

GREAT STORY,VERY BITTERSWEET AND TRAGIC!

Lovely, but Emily's dress doesn't have sleeves!

I LOVED THIS! you write so very well, and the plot is good. please write more. you are an amazing writer. go you!