Good! I particularly liked the idea of the Chaos Gods drinking something "other" then beer.

Good, but I can't help but feel that it could be more. While the deities are in character, their number and diversity feel limited, in that while there's contrast between the Chaos gods for instance, they all harken back to the same 'source'. More cultural representation and verbal conflict between the gods (eg. Khorne and Slannesh are the antithesis of each other if I recall correctly) would have been appreciated.

Still, characterisation is done accuratly.

that was pretty funny im thinking of writing a story called what if

having like races and stuff joined together in the darkest hell ever known to mortals and gods alike

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