So um... did you die? Work this good should be finished.

Gahhh I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you haven't lost your will to finish such an amazing story!

I really wish you would update this. It's so wonderfully charming...and to think of it languishing in development hell... :(

Wow, Naminé is starting to get irritating. All she does is cry and fight with poor Riku. Stupid Naminé! Can't you see that Riku just LOVES YOU? And that you secretly love Riku, too? Gosh.

As if I weren't bad enough at updating my own stories, but now I've developed this bad habit of not reviewing awesome stories such as this when I'm supposed to. But I'm now catching up on my reviewing and will leave you my thoughts on the previous chapters thus far. I can honestly say I like the flow of the story. Riku and Naminé have developed a nice relationship, but things aren't moving too fast. I think my favorite so far is Tifa. I like the way you portray her, kind of like the comical and meddlesome mother. XD

I'm starting to feel bad for Riku. He's turning into a nice guy in this story rather than remaining a douchebag like he started out as. XD Hmm, I don't know, I think I like your lemon drop Riku better than jerk Riku. Um, so, so, when do I get romantic development? :3 Gah, you have to update so I CAN GET MY ROMANTIC DEVELOPMENT. PLEASE?

Dark Ambition

Wow, this is good! And Roxas is the worst person in the world and a meteorite should drop down and smash him on his big stupid head!

Ahem. Sorry.

Riku's so sweet!

Really great work!

-Larka

Oh wow. Alot of things happened in this chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next! Update soon!

Yay, finally an update! Roxas or Riku? What a situation to be stuck in! I don't envy Namine... no wait, I still do, she gets to be with Roxas and Riku!

I LURVE YOUR STORY! *Drools Over Story* I WILL HUNT ROXAS DOWN, Gr...THAT MEANIE HEAD WILL GO! MWUAHAHAHAHAHA! Other than that, Great Story!

Well at least Riku's not the bastard in this one. There was one that made him such a badass I would've torn my CD apart just by looking at his face...

OMGOMGOMG 8D

YAY THEY WENT OUT ON A DATEE!

I was squealing when Namine kissed him XD Even if it was only on the cheek. His reaction was just HILARIOUS "...Bleh-heh," XD

Roxas better be cheating on her! SO THAT SHE WILL DUMP HIM AND GO WITH RIKU 8D *rubs hands together evilly*

Can't wait for another update :DD

Boo!

You didn't finish and now I want to read it more :(

See how sad you make me! Haha, just kidding. Partially...

But this was a wonderful story/chapter/thingy!

That was awesome.

Kairi got punched XD

And the brick wall is tumbling down :(

YOU FREAKING ROCK!

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!

Good for Nami, Roxas is a jerk in this fic. )

-Larka

Awesome story and good chapter. i was starting to fear the worst, like you know maybe you'd abandoned us. AH! The thought makes me shutter. Anyway have fun in D.C.

AGH! YOU RUINED THE SURPRISE! Though I must admit guiltily that I like where this is going. Well, not the AxelRoxas thing. I'm not a fan of yaoi. Now, the RikuNamine thing I like hehehe. Update soon!