I thought this was going to be the missing part from the book but it doesn't seem like it. She is too big too soon for one. Bella also sounds like an idiot. Her angel hurt her? Really? She sounds like a wuss. Of course the baby was going to hurt her. Wasn't that what they were talking about over and over the day before?

Don't own twilight

Bella always had a problem of wanting everything. I get that she wants to kewp the baby but I don't think she understands exactly what risks she is taking and is not willing to listen to anyone else but herself. It's what annoyed me in the book in the first place.

I had been searching for this perspective of the story since I read the book. Thank you very much for providing it. It was all very well-written. Xx

Good but misleading with the parring

Yeah you captured the "essence" of the source material perfectly. Absolute. Garbage. This was basically you rehashing things that happened in the source with very slight, insignificant changes. I've read a lot of good Twilight fics, because in those fics, the authors have the testicular fortitude to fix Stephenie Meyers god awful writing, and things in the twilight world that are just plain stupid. Misleading pairing listing, the only reason I read half of this shit show was because I was hoping it was a Bella/Rosalie fic, like your listing would leave me to believe. Instead I got this pile of hot garbage, with the same shitty characters from the source. Seriously, are any of these characters meant to be likable? Like at all? Literally every person in this story was annoying, and idiotic. The only reason this crap has so much attention drawn to it is because o your misleading listings, and vague story summary.

Hey last chapter is very nice i waited for this chapter a while thanks its awesome

Such a good story
Love you

This really shouldn't be marked with Rosalies name and the romance genre, it's all Edward and Bella garbage where Bella is a weak submissive pussy worshipping the ground Edward walks on, except slight irritation

How muchllonger until the family realizes the baby is half vampire and needs blood

Thank you Taylor.

Love this chapter.

I really enjoyed your story. I wish you had written the entire BD story from Edward's POV. Congrats on your first fanfiction, keep up the good work.

Love this chapter. Leah hit the nail right on the head. Lol. Bella is damn selfish. I love her and Edward but come on man all those unnecessary pain that she but Edward and Jacob through. Selfish, self-centered Bella. Love your work.

leah always was a self righteous bitch. okay, maybe she had a reason with sam, but then again she did go out of her way to make the whole pack suffer. I could never understand why, if she didn't want to be a wolf that she just didn't get the hell out of la push, stop phasing and make a life for herself somewhere else.