Reviews for Tango |
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![]() ![]() ![]() «She came close to confessing her feelings without the aftermath of denial many times, and he came close to snapping and refusing to accept that denial», the precise and realistic description of their relationship. «"What are you talking about?" Arnold inquired, while Helga came up with a million silent theories», so funny this bit. The ending was unexpected, but nicely simple, « he wasn't waiting for her as he thought he was; she was waiting for him». |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this chapter and I sure wish it would continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() because everyone has secrets... aw :') can't wait for the next chap B) |
![]() ![]() ![]() because he wasn't waiting for her... she was waiting for him. I love that :) I love how you used the word tolerance too and how you used it to describe them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh, very good one. And, again, Bob acts like an idiot. Keep the good writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i enjoy your style of writing and love your characterization of them. keep going ill be reading |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like these one shots-you're doing a really good job capturing Arnold and Helga's relationship and this certain romantic tension between them that makes for great reading :) I'm definitely looking forward to seeing what you come up with next! Thank you! ~Azure129 aka Jenna |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great one-shot :)! I like how you used the word 'tolerate' through out it and how you handled the confession. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sweet. I love the way you wrote this. Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Short, sweet, and great. Really enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, i am so sorry, i just got your PM and i can't believe i forgot to review your story! i apologize, i got wrapped up in my short oneshot i just added about hey arnold, that i guess i forgot. i really loved this fanfiction, and it helped inspire me (in a sense) to write mine. i apologize agian. keep up the good work! ~WizKid94 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I'm sorry, sorry, sorry! I feel so bad for not reviewing considering the fact that I always tell people who read my stories to review. I'm such a hypocrite. Ok, here goes. I absolutely adore this story. Really. Truthfully. It's very good. A bit closed in but amazing! I mean, I'd just came into this archive when I watched one of the episodes and decided that Arnold and Helga make a cute couple and I read your story first. Let's just say I didn't leave the archive for a while, what with such a great beginning. Really, I'd be telling you all this in a normal PM but I have yet to figure out how to send one of those. Hehe. I'm dumb, I know. I think the characters were remarkably in character and the flow of the story was quite steady. Dreamy. Nyum. Hehehe. Well, since I have no criticism, there isn't really much to say so sorry, I'd have to edn it here. Still, your story is marvellous and I'll continues to read it over and over again. :) Bye! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I apologize for not leaving a review and just setting the story to favorites (I know how that feels). I was skimming through Hey Arnold one-shots, the summary intrigued me so I read it. What I like about the story is how you kept the two in character from beginning to end. The word choice was good too. I love how Arnold's grandmother comes in and it sort of breaks the "Tolerance" between the two and it shifts from the usual routine and sets the story to its. Great Job for a first Hey Arnold fanfiction, I've not wrote one myself but I used to watch the show all the time and I remember the characters quite well. I was in the mood for Hey Arnold fictions and yours was one of the ones I really liked. Great Job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Squeels like a true fangirl* - I loved the ending - that was brilliant. You did this couple justice. |