Terrific story! I love the twist on the pilot of Supernatural, with the Tracy's as the main characters. Well done!

So, this is the second time I've read this, and the second time I've reviewed. I have to say, it's just as good the second time. However, my mind keeps moving forward with the story and how they could eventually create International Rescue. In my mind they kill the demon and move to the island because they are recluses. Jeff had already started plans for IR so the 'Birds were already started being built at the time. John goes to space and TB5 cause he's amazing at communications, loves space, and wants to get away from his power. No minds to read in space, after all. The others just don't use their powers all that much, although they keep in practice. And Alan kinda locks his down while he's at school. Which leads to the attack of the Hood in the 2004 movie and how different it would have been had they had those powers. I would love to see you write something like that. Love it to I also can't see you doing that as this was written like three, almost four years ago. Makes me kinda sad, actually. Still, lovely story. I adore it.

Can I just say 'Wow'? Seriously, I'm lovin' it. (McDonalds anyone? What? I'm hungry.) The only thing that would have made it better in my mind was the inclusion of the Thunderbirds...although how you'd pull that one off, I have no idea. Huh. I'll have to think on that one. Thanks for this, though! It was amazing!

Aw... Awesome lol

It's like supernatural...Cool

I love this series. I really do. I can't tell you how much I enjoy your twisting the Supernatural plots into the Tbird universe. It's just awesome! Thank you *so* much for sharing this universe with everyone. )

This was a great story! I enjoyed it immensely and was sad when it ended lol i do hope you are considering a sequel because this has so much potential and i'd love to know more about all their powers especially John's ;)

Again, excellent work! Keep it up!

Ack! No! *glares playfully at author* I was getting down towards the bottom and I'm sitting here thinking 'she's going to leave us hanging in some form of other, isn't she?' and sure enough...XD there is is...a wonderful cliffhanger with the hopes that said author will start another fic that has them looking for Jeff (because we can't have him continue to be missing, can we?) and let us see more of this because there is just oh so much more to see! *pokes you* I know *I* for one would be interested in a second fic...and it was funny, the other night I stumbled across the story that was like this one that you mentioned earlier and while there are similarities to the both of them, you take yours on a different course...and go a bit further with it! So kudo's for taking a plot that you decided you liked and ran with it till' the end, making it your own. *pokes author again* So...are we gonna see more? Or are ya just gonna be mean and leave us hanging? XD (I've also jsut got to add an 'aw...cute!' for the whole brotherly love scene between Scott and Alan at the end, that was priceless ~)

this story is so nice. :) please write a sequel. it's brilliant. :) love the brotherly bonding. :)

Perfect chapter! I loved this chapter so much. Scott wanting Alan to be his son only to have to give him back to their father. So much drama and so much sadness. A lot of brotherly love and alot more visions on the way I know it. This is turning out to be one great story and I can't wait for more. Waiting for the next Installment! See you later!

-Rogue

Brilliant. It would be really good if you kept going. :-)

I do like that ending better. The kids pulling mommy to Hades always kinda creeped me out.

over?...

NO!

*tear*

are youo gonna write a sequal?

ash

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I can't believe it's over! I'm so upset! It was so good... Please tell me that there's going to be a sequel!

A lovely ending to a brilliant story :D

Wow.

A fantastic ending to an equally fantastic story, my friend. I loved the little scene with Alan as he explored the childrens' memories, that was very detailed and I could picture the whole thing easily (distressing as it was to do so).

The way that you gradually wound down the action as the chapter ended - that was great. It was a perfect way to finish off this story, and we are left with the impression that the brothers will continue to fight as a family, whilst still protecting each other from the 'monsters', so to speak. *sigh* Shame it had to end.

Please, you gotta do a sequal! This was fantastic! I'm serious, it was. You are a really talented author, and your stories are both enjoyable and completely addictive. Love it!

O, great chapter! It's getting to the good stuff (not that it wasn't good before...but you know what I mean :P)

I loved the bit with Gordon and Virgil. It's not a brother combination that you tend to see too often but I think they work well together and you've written them very well :-D

And o, I hope that John's going to be okay. But a little bit of whump wouldn't be frowned upon :p