Reviews for Taste the Defeat
Lol chapter 1 . 5/25
XD LOL I LOVE IT I DIDN'T EXCEPT THERE WAS LEMON OF THIS SHIP HAHAHAHA XD
Lifina Irtania chapter 1 . 2/5/2015
To be honest i don't like blow job -" if you ask me why i still reading it, its because the pairing of course. I love Pierre and Chelsea too much to not to read about them. Good job Author! XD
Rodbae28 chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
This was really hot and I liked how you could also add Pierre's personallity in there without it being OOC.
One of my new favoriite fanfictions, thank you!
TFG chapter 1 . 2/3/2014
OH MY 0.0-LOL XD Frist time a lemon ever made me laugh so hard! Great fic! I loved the one about Shea as well there aren't enough fics about him!:)
catti chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Ohmygod that was amazing
whiteroses1994 chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
You should make a one wher he eats her hehe*blushes*
Green Sprout chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
This wasn't horrible; this was pretty hot. There needs to be more of this pairing totally.

Like more romance, sex, SOMETHING.

*fans herself* faving this
Fritillaria Vajra chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Aaaaw! great! even just blowjob but for me that its awesome :DDDD keep up good work!
23453565787 chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
I haven't reviewed stories like this and I was thinking of what I should say... Without a doubt it is my favorite, I think you did a fantastic job on this story. It was both funny and very sexy at the same time. I'd like to see you do this story with the tables turned around. The title says it all. You did an excellent job and as always keep up the good work! xDDD

~Angel~
VividlyVisceral chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Let's get one thing straight right now, I've never gone for Pierre. I thought he was cute, a little bit strange- but he always took a backseat to Shea and Elliot... and Mark and basically everyone.

-but I enjoyed this. You somehow managed to make it seductive in parts... and uproariously funny. I wish I could give you more praise than this, but I'm still smiling from how wonderfully set out it all way.

Also the ending was the coup de grace. It seemed like a simple enough line- but it was delivered spectacularly and was- I suppose as Pierre might lavishly put it- the cherry on top.

Bravo. Honestly, bravo. If you haven't already patted yourself on the back for mastering grammar and spelling- do so immediately.
XxAnimeCutiexX chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
Lol, nice job! I love the part when Chelsea says, "Anything you make is delicious." Genius! :D
Accidentally The Whole Fanfic chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
Hahaha, this is even funnier when you take into mind the faces Pierre makes in the game! It's hard to not see him as the little-kid-looking dude from Island of Happiness, though.

Still, funny as hell, and kind of original, too.
Daoiki chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
...I love this story...but I don't want my grandma coming onto the page to see if her 'baby-doll' wrote anything...AND SEE PORN ON HER FAVORITES! So I'll definately add you as a favorite author. That's why I have so many...huhuhuhuhu...
danceallnight chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
Cute! I REALLY appreciate the correct grammar and punctuation. Would you write one for Shea, please?
Pen of Paracelsus chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Nice very sexy its so hard to find lemons in harvest moon archives that are even slightly tasteful or realistic but you did a awesome job. n.n
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