awesome.

hahahahaha very funny! XD

Roflrofl that's awesome xD What a genius idea to put the two together! Very original!

Lol I liked these parts;

"Try not to be too violent my lady. You don't want to turn this into animal cruelity." warned Sakura nerviously, knowing what wrath her master could and would unleash.

All they knew was that they wouldn't be seeing much of Naruto or Tonton for the next couple of months.

I love this! I love it a whole lot! It's so funny!

When the summary said that what Naruto was doing had them freaked out...I thought you meant the 'Naked Skateboarding' scene

Naruto could pump chakra under a piece of wood to speed himself up...or...*gasp*...do it in combination with the Sexy Jutsu!

...I liked it!

I didn't laugh much, but I did like the situation. I liked the part where Tsunade had to scrub the floor (it's rare that she didn't tell Shizune to do this for her. It's also weird that she didn't have a mop)

I also liked the part where Naruto showed up.

By the way..

Dose - Does

Would'nt - Wouldn't

Just helping.

Keep up the great work!

hilarious! i can so see Naruto doing that!

Great job! The only thing that I noticed were some spelling errors and typos like "would'nt", and "nerviously", but you're better at writing than other people on here. _

It was funny and enjoyable to read; I could just imagine it as an anime episode!

lol spider pig

I've seen a fanart where Tonton is walking on the ceiling and Tsunade is proud of her. Check for it on

XD Hahahah!I just knew you were gonna do that scene. I didn't even watch the movie, but it was played so many times on the commercials. I just figured Naruto and tonton would play a part _

~cardcaptor eternity