Great I love it
When will we continue?
When is Naruto sleeping with her friends and getting pregnant? we can add Mei and Yugao and Samui would be cool !?
No hinata in the Harem please

J'adore ce genre d'histoire tu aurait pu même rajouter Tsunade mais la laisser comme "mère"

More please

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.

I really liked the story to bad that it looks like you abandoned it

That's still weird for me im never reading a harem ever again(im still going to read it wait what im writing everything i think shit stop it hand nnoooo don't think about that shit why did i think about...

damn ... a threesome I see

Okay that was so wierd for me

nice job, cant wait for the next chapter

update pls pls pls pls

I'm going to be blunt: your grammar is fucking awful. Also your writing style is really repetitive. Overall, not a good story.

he die !? its died you said die the whole story

The writing is a bit repetitive and to fast paced. There were also a lot of grammar mistakes. Good structure but, you should have made the sections with the members of Team 7 larger, especially with Sauske. Otherwise, good work so far.

Good story arc but sloppy writing and the names are off snake face is oroachmaru dome words need to be ploural or an s on them still as a story not bad

Good story but the names are off like snake face is oroachimaru and the spelling in some sentences needs some work b pretty good though