Amazing! Beautiful! I'm annoyed with myself that I have put up reading this for a long time. But I'm glad that I finally did. This is a really wonderful story. Roy being a chimera is one of the things that makes this unique. And I love how Roy was made to a chimera. You're a genius to change Roy only on the inside. Thank you for sharing this story

*sobs but still loves the ending anyway*

i just had go wipe off my makeup because i started crying...why

What a wonderful fic! I really enjoyed this! I admit I was hoping for some lemons and that it was extremely fluffy (my teeth hurt!) but overall this was a fantastic story, well written and a pleasure to read! I like the idea of chimera Roy, and your take on it was certainly original. I would have liked to see Roy struggle a bit more with some stronger animal urges and instincts, I feel like it may have deepened things more, but you also kept it believable in your representation, which was good.
The only thing I really did not like about this story was how easily our two heroes killed. It seems out of character for Ed to kill anyone, even if it's for a mission and they are the bad guy, and I think it was totally unnecessary for Roy to kill Ed's ex near the endthe guy didn't do anything deserving of murder. That really rubbed me wrongI'm now going to check out your other stuff! Congrats on writing this incredible story!

*crying a freaking hurricane, because rivers and oceans aren't good enough*

Awwww so cute!

The addition of Armstrong was perfect! I can literally see this happening:D

Hahaha who knew Mustangs team were such perverts!

Jason is going to get it! He must be crazy if he thinks that he can just disregard Mustangs warning like that!

Ed only cares about what those closest to him think, and even then I think he would still continue doing what he wanted whether they approved or not. The only difference being he would like their approval.

I know I've said this a least a million times, but they are seriously so adorable!

I love how Roy and Ed have these inside jokes that no one else will ever get. It's adorable:D

Well that went very well. I'm glad, I don't think I could have handled it if Al didn't care for Ed's happiness.

Wonder how this talk will go? Please let it go well.

Hahaha I about died laughing! Poor Falman ahahaha:D