This story had my heart doing somersaults

Hi, I want to read the non-edited version of this fic, I went to your profile but the link sends me to the same page I am, so plis can you tell me how to acess to it? Thank you.

Hey, I have some doubts about what happened in the previous chapter. I mean, was that just something Naruto invented in his head or what? So if that's the case all the Kisame thing is a lie, isn't it? Then Sasuke is a f*cking liar rapist...

I... I feel very weird. This story was beautifully written but my mind needs a break now. I think I’ll need to get a good night’s sleep now. Very interesting story. Very interesting.

Very interesting first chapter. I really, really like this so far.

It might be cruel, but I do like the fact that the 1st chap was true and not the 5th.
Also I adore Sasuke's speech. I can't imagine how it sounded, but it is so endearing.
Fuck, I just enjoyed the fic.

This story is one of the best stories ever! It's just sooo mind-boggling that you have to take a second to fully wrap your head around it. It leaves you gaping and utterly horrified that you love it at the same time. Trust me, it's one of a kind

Disregard the previous comment. I found the other links on your livejournal page. This was a great story. Loved the mind games of it and your writing style.

I read the livejournal version first because I thought it would be the entire story AND the uncut parts. And then I briefly glanced at this chapter and it was different from the livejournal one so I read it. And I must say it is completely different. You should have the livejournal one written like this with the added missing parts in place. I like how your writing style allot. Glad this version continues so I can understand what's happens next.

Wtf? Omg...Now we know that ignorance is truly a bliss. Being idiot must be awesome. Well, the more you know something, the more your brain will explode to insanity. Truth hurts. At least most of the time.
I don't know what to feel. Will they just live like that? Sasuke being manipulative and Naruto, the manipulated. Well, I'm kinda interested to that research that Kakashi told Naruto. I wonder if Kakashi is part of Sasuke's plan?

I really don't know what to say about this one.. I'm a big fan of angst and I love reading about the darker parts of the human mind but this was..a bit too much for me. I think you took all of the darker parts of Naruto and Sasuke's character and cranked it up to 100. Not to say that I didn't enjoy it, it provided me a lot of insight. I can't really decide for sure whether Naruto really loves Sasuke or if he's stuck in a cycle of Stockholm Syndrome. I can't decide if Sasuke really loves Naruto or if he's just possessive beyond belief. Heck, I'm still thinking about who's story to believe! (Not only that, I don't think I WILL EVER see the color purple the same again. Purple..the color of dark beauty..ah..that line haunts me still.) I don't want to think about the fact that Sasuke gave Naruto those whisker marks, but I know it's true because Sasuke had retrieved a kitchen knife along with the olive oil, hadn't it? -wipes away a tear-
Anyway, I think I'll probably check out some of your other works as well. I definitely felt the emotions, raw and unrelenting in this story.
Oh! A little constructive criticism..the epilogue did feel a bit clipped, too short and incomplete maybe? But I can live with that.

I never felt so touched by a six-chapter fanfic till this moment. I think that there wasn't a more suitable end for this, and even if it is not a happy ending at all (Naruto will be fooled for maybe the rest of his life and Sasuke will live with guilty) is pretty realistic

Omg! This is soo not a happy ending. nor with naruto stil living in the dark and forgetting what really happened! Great fic. just left me a bit winded.

This story fucked me up, holy shit. I loved it.

im so glad you had an explanation at the end