i'd say it's quite an amazing first time ;)

Aww, Peter, just stay on the couch. You had Olivia's personality down really well, and the reactions on both characters' parts were really good. Great job!

That was so sweet! Peter and Olivia are so getting together...loved it! will you write more? please? ;)

Very well written. I'm really glad that you reigned them back and kept it so realistic. :) Nicely done.

And, now, by your name I'm guessing you write Bones fic, so I'm going to check that out. :D

I liked it.

That was freaking adorable!

i couldnt be shy even if i tried. and i love it. i also think that you should try smut and see how it works out. of course you have to write a fringe story with it.

I really really like it ) its well written, in character and the tension slowly builds throughout the piece. I hope you continue it, there so much peter/olivia potential in the show...

-Ani

Fabulous scene. I hope there are more as the season continues. It was absolutely wonderful and the tension between Olivia and Peter is spot on.

I liked it, very well written, good presentation of the characters. My only slight problem is that the only person who ever (that we know of so far anyway) called Olivia "Liv" was John, a man who loved her and she loved in return. The Peter and Olivia relationship is GREAT, one of my altime faves, but I think it would be a bit early on for him to be calling her a loving pet name. In any event, I did like it!

Oh, my God, I love this pairing. Wow, that was fast! :) Great job! The voices were spot on.

Pirate.

Very well done! It doesn't seem unrealistic or impossible and the characterization was spot on - I liked it very much! Peter/Olivia is my favorite pairing (not there are many pairings in the first place, but still . . .) and I enjoy reading fanfics about them, since the show is definitely going to be a bit slower about building a relationship between them.

I would definitely enjoy seeing more of your work, so please keep it up!

wow that was amazing you really got the characters!

I really like this story. You've definitely got the characters down. Great job! Please write more, and really, don't worry about having to make it K ;-)

My god, that was good! The tension between Peter and Olivia was just amazing the way you wrote it. Amazing job!