Nice story you have here. Jenks is one of those few people in Twilight who were pretty intresting characters.

But you know in the book its stated that Jenks is about 55 years old. So I find it little unsettling that he kinda finds Bella, who could be his daughter or even his granddaughter by her age, attractive. I mean for example Charlie likes Alice a lot but certainly not in that way. But then again Bella is a first female vampire J has ever met so maybe it's understandable.

Good :)

"Was he finally dead?" Lol, funniest sentence today. LOL LOL LOL.

Really liked it! great job :)

very good,i like it!

and it was a little bit funny!

keep up with writting anything you want and also other moments from the twilight saga and especially from breaking dawn!

great story.

coolios

cool

well done on getting into js mind

i loved it!

I very much enjoyed J's point of view on the events - I would love to read another chapter from you :)

towards the end of chapter 2, J is refered to as "he" and bella as "I" - little misshap I suppose - but otherwise a very well written story :)

many thanks for sharing

This is really good! I alywas wondered what he was thinking here

That was really good.

I think thats one of the best i've read so far.

quick, to the point, but still dead on perfect.

Bravo, write again,

-CullenLove002

wow, this is a very interesting choice of topic. I liked it, though I do have to say that I don't think greedy people think of themselves as greedy :D Well done, keep up the good work.

Loved it! Great writing style, beautifully put together. I love the character of J...but more so I love reading about "small" characters and their interactions with the Cullens, which this fic does wonderfully. Keep up the good work!

Again, this was REALLY REALLY good! i love how you can give this story from a charecters perspective we hardly know about! thats waht I call TALENT!

great job.

keep it going. i loved it. :D