This is excellent! It is written extremely well and reads so fluently. You've really managed to capture the characters personalities. Please carry on I'm hooked! :-)

I hope there is more on the way and I liked how you wrote Jack, Audrey.

you don't want to continue ?

update please !

great chapter ... continue please !

Fantastic cant wait for more!

aw sad ( i wonder though if this will stick to the story line or stray off? either way ill be happy. Good update! can't wait for the next!

wow , it was great ! we need more!

I loved the chapter. I ditto about bringing in what happened in the prequel. This is great. Keep writing. Can't wait for the next chapter!

This is awesome! I LOVE how you integrated it with the season 4 prequel.

I also like the part where Jack insists that she stop apologizing for asking about his past...very realistic, IMO.

Great job...I hope you either write more of this or write more Jack/Audrey stories...there aren't enough and I am really missing her this season!

Love the new chapter. It was so cute with Kim and Audrey bonding and all. And I remember the ending from the season, and had to say "uh oh I know what comes next" and I personally didn't care for the end of that day the first time (or the 8 times after when I bought the season) In the begginning they were so cute... *sighs woefully* Well anyway I hope you continue this cause I can't wait to see what tricks you have up your sleeves. Post soon!

o this is something new!

I like it - I don't tend to read J/A fanfic, but this one is definately great!

One little thing, though. In one of the earlier chapters, you spelt Myers wrong. Its not a problem or anything, though.

I love pre season 4 stories! They never told us much about how Audrey and Jack got together!

another excellent chapter!

but season 4 happening so soon?

cant wait to read more!

like it a lot so far, but im wonderig if audreys trip to cali is the beginning of season 4 maybe? just wondering