I see you like Evanescence. SWEET! They rock, right?

lol never thought mac would be one to play the sweet and concerned tomfriend but i like the idea that this is what lead up to they're more parasitic relationship :) cool idea!

ooh! you should make this a continuation. it would be really cute

I. Love. This. Can you continue PLEASE?

A great story. Very good.

Wel, well, well. Much as she tries, I somehow don't think our Deme will ever be another Bomba. Great story. :-)

i have 2 admit that i am a little upset that you're not continuing with this. don't get me wrong, i loved the whole thing. but you could seriously go further with this . . . why don't you? you could say that macavity gets possesive with demeter and demeter ends the relationship. maybe she has a kitten with him . . . or perhaps she stays with him even if he gets abusive. even if you don't continue, i still loved it and am still a fan.

I love it! It shows a very "dangerous" side of Demeter. I'm so glad you decieded to respond to my challenge! Haha I thought no one would to be honest.

Anyways, very cool.

Maddy

I absolutely love it. Really powerful and convincing, and the end was brilliant. Sheesh. Reading again now. :D