I've read sevarl of your stories and I'm commenting on a first chapter because this is my favorite story you've written and use like to say thanks for the amazing work and sorry if you were trying to forget about fan-fic Pease.

But it wasn't his back.

Cynder does have fear breath.

What?
NNnnoooooooo! Hunter!
Goshdangit man, (sniff), you made me cry!

Holy crap man, do you not like ignitus or something? And I thought he died and became the new chronicler after Dawn of the Dragon. Oh btw I REALLY like the new enemy, good job on that.
Aright imma keep read'n now.

Holy crud-nuggets, there's a dark Cynder as well..
Hoobouy..

Well... I'm very late to post a review, but I'll do it anyway. It's one of the best stories I've ever read, if not THE best one!

This fic still brings me tears when I read it. Bravo, bro! Bravo!

Oh... my... god... I can't believe she tried to do that. This chapter is sad, sad, SAD. :'(

OOHHHHHHH SHNAPS! Ignitus ain't gonna be happy... I'm so excited! Good job

May your wings never fail you, on your way to destiny

Wish the sequel would be updated ,_, you write really well!

I hate to do this, but it should be "we have even less time now" not "we got littler time left now."

Very good chapter. I was afraid that Cyril would say the opposite of what he did.

Adoni's ideals sound kind of like Hitler's.

Uh oh. I don't like the look of this. I also can identify with how Cynder feels, although I have never been close to trying to take my own life. I also have felt how Spyro feels. I would take a bullet for ANY member of my family.