Reviews for Sunrise
Ayushisinghtwilight chapter 16 . 10/6
Well written. I liked attitude full Bella... Love this story. Complete it please
MMTyler chapter 15 . 6/19
Finally they both admit that imprint. A double imprint. Wow.
Debbie Hicks chapter 16 . 1/1/2019
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Chapter 17. then Biotten Sam dried wholiest then to His imprint then with Seth then Thre then to best friends under te full moon then then With toddlers and kids bitten praying to Akraana to Aliens and Vulcans too thjen fled got you Lycann what your dead wit this one MAULEDBY ALIEN ANIMALS BROKEN THEN THEN DRied up the Cullen found her cropse then you die with the Lycans then Her screams take them to You know our law kill her/they Heads tore off then took from them dismemberede ATOMIZEDWiththeimmortal children with them good tore from here hairs fallen off then too late ruptured organs stopped good bring them Tokk from them then Suddenly Alice felt nothing Charile save her please we will pass on with them then Carlisle Bitten her to become Isabella Cullen with them then Motionless with them bitten good Executed her/they then vaporized then Brought them then too late Sliced into pieces Wonderous they broke this righe they been Changed but turn under the full moon are dried up good they will be destroyed they found her Pentality death her screams was heard then then wit them MURDERED! Bring them here they are Punished then lost from here then Shiftpires dead followed then to late Sliced then then cremated Good theyu been destroyed the Seer found her very Frightened but Her own Falkor's Red eyes with theirs then Blacking outside motionles slice unble to breed Lost their families Due to old age then Smashed thed then Tore were Immortal brought the Accused good they are Dead but sliced throw them into the fire we took care as all of worldwide's as all of them with rest as all few they are Deceased then lost from here then too late Carlisle found her with hair longer wth bangs herself Had a Headache shudenly Self-Defesive Mental-Physcially Shielding then her thirst and blood could not stop Alice She is like him unable so they then Wholliest of as all mazillions of animals then too late Toefully viciously pierced Cursed to be Immortal bring them then lost from here then suddenly Were Without blood the fleding blew y up good Cursed to roam as Kindred and Galactic Lycans Smashed brought them pierced then popped freely shattered then Lost the need to eat or sleep then With siblings turned by venomous bite with both blew apart brought them Cursed them to be Supernatural beings then sliced apart affected both sides of their bodies burst freely Brought them had them killed Good with te other tribe and pack with them Drained of blood joined them cremation then Never were humans at all the head ran tests then herself Did to Rose's face touched her honing her telepathic her newest three spoke cold words: your mind to my mind your thoughts to my thoughts our minds one and whole share your mind man hides a secret pain share it draw strength with them then suddenly a White Radiant energy shielding then suddenly her pain was removed herself was a Syrannite of Surak then they too were under her control blown freely Smashed motionless Delivered then killed from they are forbidden to mate as all of guards bitten freely drained then Exploding good more as all of we need then Shattered then Lost the need to mate Alice she made me well so you then too late b;lacking ouside motionless then Reported the Criminals as all of them with dead pets/deformed young with mated both died are Guilty of no parole Sentce death to as all of them then Cremated then no more as all of them murderd then was too late the cause of death Murder then it was too late All of them world wide's as all smashed With them Shattered motionless then was no longer alive but they were All framed of them with remains as all of them were angry in voice KROYKAH! It was Stop! or Enough! they were with as all things on Vulcan met more with five to more then lost their homes to them motionless blew apart but too late brought them now too late murderd then were into blood melted away they were Immortal then in time no longer living now they were not aging/changing their next muilt-generations of as all resumed on they followed no longer fertile at all but were unable to have kids blown from as all of phased corpses with as all Vampire corpses rose as the Kindred and Galactic Lycans merged smashed now they never Die were still Completely Immortal people fully time then blown freely Vanished in oldest age then bring them they been Destroyed then too late cremation of them then lost from here Alice horrified Bella your hair is long what this bangs how stylish gasp pointed ears what into her robes to recover are from the Ray Bradbury Novel: The Martian Chronicles oh my god she's a priestess then too late they too were not humans anymore from as all intermixing of races blew up with them smashed with them brought there good then they are extinct forever trapped on Vulcan As nationals of the planet Vulcan were in fact very different beings now they were not living beings but they became much stronger beings no use of it Crap my muscles hurt who is that chick nice hair-bow it's a heirloom down boy oh man you are tall/muscular oh god she's blinded me with seduction me nah he was a womanize he was now more handsome but she was a friend loved kids ordered her best friends to babysit the kids oh man these kids are Terrors they are good kids yes jeeze team hey we are great kids down here Dawnie oh how cute Darla Paul! can't women oh! guys our pets had young healthier poor baby oh how little they are then in time all pets had young puppies/kittens but Shiloh was allergic sneezed had a allergy problem his nose was under the weather blew his nose of Cats were female had kittens were annoying then was still sneezing owned a Alaskan husky growling Strom a DOG! What this oh no puppies oh how adorable then in time they were now three weeks of age were hungry but Broud asleep Puppies oh no he whined Bark! you puppy are trouble it was a baby puppies he grumbled of puppies and kittens then Shut Down was onto him squealing get this kitten off from my robes he loves you why he's hungry for his mother'smik he now enjoyed Cats Sir! they all of them poisoned by a retro virus mutated them created a race over thrown them are freed of bodies met us/they now no more of them then lost from here they were as all of them were unable to mate.
unknown chapter 8 . 11/23/2017
sam
silver-stone2 chapter 16 . 12/1/2016
are you going to finish this story or make a sequel ?
Gabby-Hunter chapter 5 . 11/25/2016
I get the feeling she is adopted and is billy's daughter probably the women he had a thing with as well
vicky86 chapter 1 . 10/8/2015
Thanks love if
Twilight bae chapter 5 . 6/12/2015
This is really good you should make more
Child of Dreams chapter 1 . 1/19/2014
Um, even down here in Florida (I live about 35 miles west of Jacksonville), it is NOT 90 degrees during January.
The highest the temperature gets around this time of the year is low-to-mid 60s.
Right now, it's 61 degrees outside.
mizzmeakabby chapter 16 . 11/30/2013
Great story,but I can't find the person that adopted it...Can you give me a link were I can go and read it?
Lukas Scott chapter 16 . 5/27/2013
Great story but I can't find Callie-Cullen, can you give me at least a link ?
BloodLily22 chapter 16 . 5/19/2013
I love the story but I can't find the person who adopted the story can you help me find them?
loventherussian17 chapter 16 . 1/20/2013
great story so far hope u finish it couldnt find the person so figured they arent doing it
mmiraclecooper chapter 16 . 11/19/2012
YOU SHOULD FINISH THE STORY!
Dannyvampchick chapter 16 . 12/13/2011
This is cool!
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