Apart from the fact that Haruhi would never be a write this was good. I really enjoyed it.

I really liked this story! Just like that other one-shot you made, it was just fulfilling on its own. And again, you surprised me, since I didn't expect the two to be already married. I wonder what the twins and Tamaki thought of their marriage...

-Twinklefeather

I love a well written Kyoya/ Haruhi fic. Well done.

aw...dear wife XD

i wish i was born in the manga..,ajjaja

This was fun; it also reminds me of your other fic, "Tenshi for Akuma". Looks like one possible outcome for it. Thanks!

...i can't help but sigh at how you portrayed kyouya... really sexy...

*sigh* i wish i was haruhi.

nice fic! i wish this wasn't a one-shot.

Heh. I would like to wake up with Kyouya next to me, too. XD

He can be so dangerously attractive... Hm. No wonder Haruhi writes stories like that. Hahaha. Cute story. Write another Kyouya-Haruhi, please. :)

hehehe, not bad at all.. i wouldve asked for more-more details, more chapters, but you already said that this is a oneshot, so ill just shut up and move on (read: i want more!) XD

Oh... I'd love to wake up with that sensual devil beside me. ;)

Love the story despite the little OOC-ness of the two. And you're very playful with words. I like the way you write. :)

Great job! I hope to read more of your KyouHaru stories. :)

AHH! SO CUTE! LOVE YOUR FIC!KYOUYA IS MY GOD!

I hope you continue writing more ouran fics..

Strange why haruhi had to run away from kyouya and he turned into her stalker...you know if their husband and wife...